|Reviews for Bygone Days|
| Elles Green chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
I read this a little while ago and I'm sorry I didn't review it sooner. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the summary, but this story ended up being at least 5x more entertaining than I thought it would be! The plot is original and the character interactions are hilarious. Great work, keep it up!
| moviegal99 chapter 5 . 3/27/2012
Very cool! I love this story, and the next chapter sounds great!
cant wait xxmoviegal
| AprilSeven2 chapter 5 . 3/23/2012
Hooo boy, I know this kind of relationship - it's my husband and I! Ha haaaa! Just tonight, we are both super-stressed out/overworked and each one needs the other to really be "the comforting one." We bickered and jabbed sharp words . . . but in the end kissed and held hands as always (but we've been working it out for 23 years!) - So yes, I can just see these two and the stubbornness and futile effort to fight off their feelings for each other
Nothing like reading a good love story on a Friday night! I'm just trying to figure out just what is going to break down their walls. The idea of Ham Egg in the middle is a riot - I kind of see the 2009 movie running through my head as I'm reading this!
And here's something to muse over . . . if Hoshi is Elefun's niece, then so is Toby/Astro . . .and I would agree that Astro's personality is VERY similar to his uncle! XD
LOVE IT, and so glad you've added more . . . keep it comin' now!
| AprilSeven2 chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
It was a LOUSY week. I'm sitting here nursing a sinus headache and trying to cheer myself up. Decided to see what was new in the Astro Boy section of - and I decided to read your story because it's going to be about more than "Astro falls in love for the first time."
YOU MADE MY WHOLE WEEK! This is a wonderful, wonderful study of characters - the Hoshie/Hoshi (?) as niece of Elephun connection is SPECTACULAR! Bringing in Ham Egg - the bickering in the lecture hall - Tenma as a believably OCD workaholic and Hoshi as a similar sort who recognizes her soul-mate and both are stuck at "what do we do now?"
My only disappointment is that you haven't continued for a while - this is a real treasure of a story, because so many of us really want to understand what happened to Tenma and Hoshi before Tobio perished. You get an idea from the manga that she was "only" a housewife and he was a bullying husband prone to drinking to excess (but that were based on 1950's-type people). You've done a wonderful job updating the characters and setting.
PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP!
| moviegal99 chapter 4 . 1/6/2012
lol i love it! why doesnt it have more reviews?
| astro boy chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
hi there. yes, i AM the real Astro, though many have deniyed it. anyway, i like to see whatz going on in my fan site (i dont mean to sound vain), and yep, thats my dad alright! real good work, hope ya update soon
| BerryCoffeeCake chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
Very good writing! Love all the witty banter and Tension you've got going on between Tenma and Hoshie. Can't wait to read more. :)
| Star Kirkland-Jones chapter 3 . 10/27/2011
XD Oh, my dear Hoshie... XD beating Tenma with a computer tablet won't make him stop liking you. XD. update soon!
Star Atomu Saturday
| Star Kirkland-Jones chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
This story is SOOOO cute! :D Upadte soon, for me! :)
| Star Kirkland-Jones chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
XD Tenma, when will you see? You're gonna get married, and have the cutest son EVER! :D. Other then me loving this story, I have nothing much to say. Update soon!