|Reviews for Captive|
| Rowangorn chapter 1 . 2/20
Please finish this story! It is very good and unique. I really like it! :)
| silmarillly chapter 1 . 1/31
ur story is really gud i just think u should have hermione with snape
they r a much cuter couple
i like ur writing tho u shud update for me
my grandma has a cold and i have to go out of state
if u could update in like 5 mins so i have something to read
that would be perfect
| Evani chapter 1 . 1/29
You are an evil EVIL person, you have fabulous writing skills, and you don't have then updated Dx oh well, I'll have to wait, this really is a very original fic, I want more hahah
| burn me chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Oh my god I love the sound of this story! It's definitely not something I've read before. I know it's been two years since you've updated, but it would be really cool if you continued with this story :D
| reah chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
simply brilliant! ...a very interesting lot,unlike any I've read before...really hope you continue writing...waiting eagerly!
| thetamedrose chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
This story deserves some tender love. It's had such a captivating orientation (ironic huh?). I don't think I've ever read a story with this type of premise.
I'm quite surprised at Hermione's professionalism, especially since she'd quite near and dear to Harry. I wouldn't thought she wouldn't given Sirius a verbal beating. But then again, Hermione has a level head - it's part of her characteristic.
I implore you to update this when you feel your writer juices kicking in for this story. It has so much potential!
| authorwannabe101 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Where are you?! This story is really good and you left off on a cliffhanger! I know you're still alive and writing because you recently updated The Sands of Destiny. Please update soon!
| Luida chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Found this story whilst reading your Sands of Destiny story. Really like this idea you are very right in that most Sirius and Hermione story's are marriage law or time turn stories. However it has been a few years since you wrote this chapter so I'm not sure you are continuing with this idea but I sincerely hope that you do! I will keep a sharp eye out in the hopes that you update this story! I really hope you find inspiration to continue with this story!
| rachaelhannah chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I love the idea of this story, I've never seen another story that's even similar. Plus I love Hermione/Sirius.
I know its been a few years but will you be continuing this? I really hope you will!
| 8. B. R. Adford chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This is really interesting, what's going to happen next?!
| RedReaper118 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Please please please continue this story I love how different it is and I'm quite intreged to find out how Hermione will figure out that Sirius is a good guy
| Kaleidoscopewriter chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Why did you stop writing this? It's so good so far!
| Angelus Draco chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I really can't wait to see more of this.
| V.Evergreen chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Really hope you carry on with this soon; it looks like its going to be really good with a first chapter like that!
| SheMalfoy13 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Please please please continue this!