Reviews for may death be upon you
aveave chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
I like it. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Mellow girl chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
Really good story! I like the plot! I would love to know more about the girls. I've never seen Doctor Who but I seem to be following just fine.

My only tiny complaint is that it would make it easier to read if Characters speech were spread out more. A few misspelled words here and there but it happens to the best of us.

Really is a good story and can't wait for chapter four!