Reviews for History's Strongest Tenant Uzumaki
okhuj chapter 11 . 6/19
This story is great. I cant get enough and i look forward to further seeing your representation of naruto.
Keep up the good work
The Prophet Of Lies chapter 6 . 6/17
It was good for a bit but naruto is too perfect a Gary sue and it's boring because of it. He hasn't really been suprised and has had zero challanges he basically just some times follow kenichi and stop the maybe death. The girls are falling for him for being sane, tall, and fit and the boxer is also but still he gets no harem flag. Sigh sorry to rant but it was a good ideal.
The Prophet Of Lies chapter 2 . 6/16
Not bad but still think you made naruto to orginal he doesn't seem naruto since he is beyond tall and isn't jokey or brash that's like having an open or talky saskue. But still not a bad read
ARSLOTHES chapter 11 . 6/8
Pretty good, looking forward to the next update
Shattering chapter 11 . 6/3
You are writing less and less. It's so sad :(
GodEmporer chapter 11 . 4/27
would love to see more
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 10 . 4/16
...I VOTE KISARAAAAAA!
*cough*justsaying

...Haha, I just like Kisara. I think she has way more personality than Freya, too; although Freya's... nice. I dunno, she is. I still like Kisara much better. xD And I think she's a better fit for Naruto, since their personalities match up kind of. Freya seems too... demure, girly... if that makes sense? I think Naruto would get along with someone with more reactions and development. xD

And yay, the author's notes are smaller! much easier to focus on the story now. :P (just a personal opinion about that)
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 9 . 4/16
...Uh oh. major love triangle here!
well, for all Naruto got pissed off at Kenichi for being sexist, he's sure being oblivious about two-timing. x.x
:P
neat so far. I hope they get to more fights soon! ...I kinda want to see what they'll do to Loki. that hasn't happened yet, right? right? i'm plot-confused. xD
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 8 . 4/16
Ohh, so it's revealed... :3
I like how it's informative, but stays away from being too info-dump-y. Naruto's showing off a bit (even if it IS normal for him, it's kinda ridiculous xD)... but it's going to be so awesome if he finds a tough opponent to cut loose on... :3
I wonder how they'll manage to break the seal? ...and if the others would find out about the fox? hee.
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 5 . 4/16
k, so this is really fun so far!
The only thing I'd like to say is that the long author's notes are rather unnecessary. I mean, if there's a point you want to address briefly, that's one thing, but you're kind of explaining way too much about what you're doing, which detracts from the story-reading, if you get me. And you're spoilering your own fanfic too, so many future details... T.T
I think you should portray whatever you decide you want to IN the story, and just let it play out, and then maybe bring up a point or two if you want some input on an idea or something, but keep the author's notes from getting too explanatory. Just my bit of advice!
scionofrevan chapter 11 . 4/12
This is a great story. I have really enjoyed it. have you considered a Naruto shigure pairing?
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 4/1
not bad... hmm, though if there is a pairing i hope its Naruto/Shigure (as she is awesome and absolutely stunning)
belnonm chapter 11 . 3/15
Hi,

Shigure could be a good pairing, she could even taught him how to use Chi. The seals stops Chakra but nothing you wrote says the seals blocks all energies. In Canon, the weapon side of martial art was less approached, this can be the occasion for Naruto to become more himself and to give him a true purpose, a long-term goal to achieve, a dream to rekindle his will of fire. That could be interesting, no?
ryoryuran chapter 11 . 3/14
Need more.
silverfoxkurama chapter 11 . 2/24
nooooooooooooooooooooo more i love it
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