|Reviews for Beyond War|
| Brenda247 chapter 8 . 4/27
Such a magnific story . And it's again like almost all my favorite ones incomplete.
| SnowBus chapter 8 . 4/14
Your story was throughly captivating. I can't believe that it's only got this many reviews. I feel like your story should be one of the most popular in the sasunaru fandom! I could not put it down and ended up reading it in a day. Although I wish I hadn't read through it so quickly.. Maybe I'll reread it because this story is to be savored, like a fine wine. Your writing style is mature and creates beautiful imagery in my head. You add just the right about of suspense, a feeling of danger. No one can be sure how much time Sasuke and Naruto have together. The blossoming romance between Naruto and Sasuke is so pure and lovely. Sasuke's protectiveness, his descent into near madness due to Naruto's absence in his life, is endearing. When he had those hallucinations of Naruto, I couldn't help tear up a bit. It's apparent that Sasuke's feelings transcend love. Naruto is a part of Sasuke, embedded deep in his heart and soul. Sasuke can't live without Naruto, because Naruto is his only hope, his light. Likewise, Naruto's confusion towards Sasuke's strong feelings of love are simply adorable. I really enjoyed that. The rest of the characters are written well too. You do a nice job of writing Kabuto, and portraying the hopelessness that Madara's reign over this post-apocalyptic world has created. I really enjoyed traversing the intricate settings you created such as the enchanting pools in Whirlpool, and the dark caves in which Sasuke kept Naruto hidden. If you are still alive and well, I would like to dearly beg and plead for you to finish this story. I think it would make a lot of people happy if you did. Hell, I would even pay you to finish it if I could. Anyway, I run a blog of sorts, and I'll make sure to recommend this story to everyone I come across so you get the attention you deserve. Meanwhile, I suppose I'll have to keep myself busy and read your other stories while I wait for an update. :)
| Brenda992 chapter 8 . 3/4
I .LOVE .IT ! Too bad there's no sequel but great story.
| Kaimiyuki chapter 8 . 8/26/2016
Hey Om0cha! So I finally was able to finish this story and can I just tell you how much I love all of your SasuNaru stories? I actually recall reading your stories three, four years ago but I couldn't remember your name. But I finally found you recently and boy was I happy! Thanks for writing this amazing story! I really love Sasuke's characterization, especially the way you portray him and your writing style just... ERMGH. It's just beautiful. I love it too much. And Naruto? You're on point with your characterization of Naruto. No words needed. BTW, did you happen to delete some of your stories? I swear there was one or two more SasuNaru stories I read long ago that was not on your page... That aside, please continue! You've become one of my favorite authors on this site! I'll fully support your story! Thanks for writing and I hope that you'll be able to finish your stories soon!
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 8 . 8/31/2015
Thank you for this fic! Even if you never continue, I like how you were evolving Sasuke and Naruto's relationship!
Good luck with life!
| prameswari chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
please...please... continue this beautifully written story. it has been years since your last update and im dying to see what will happen next. i really love your work in Beyond War.
| Springtome00 chapter 8 . 8/15/2015
Great story .Love your work.
| TornUpBird chapter 3 . 6/30/2015
I'm confused about Naruto does he have 3 forms but im loving sasuke in this fanfic
| TheCountofCanterbury chapter 8 . 3/29/2015
Please note the time before I begin. Do you see it, It's late as fuck. Yet I stayed up and read this beautifully written story. I mean i saw that it wasn't updated since 2012 and there were only 8 chapters, yet I went with it nonetheless. You did not disappoint. You took the bar and destroyed it. My only concern being some back story. What happened to make Sasuke think that Naruto has manipulated him into this. Am I missing something? Also i love love love Sasuke and NAruto's relationship. The dark twisted nature of Sasuke love speaks to me. He is incapable of loving in any other way. It took him seven years. Do i have to wait seven years to see chapter nine. That last scene at breakfast leaves me in suspense. My goodnes. You have something good hear. I pray that you continue the good work.
| DiehardSNfan chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Om0cha you're being emotional. You've abandoned such a beautiful story just because of a chapter that isnt even worth delving into and Kishimoto has had no part in the plot or sketching? Are you serious? Just look at 698 it screams SasuNaru/NaruSasu! Let go of all that ludicrous gibberish and continue writing. I was angry too but Mk was coerced into this just to appease the editors. Bt he did give a shonen ai sn ending as he promised in the US mini conference. Surely you shouldnt get dissuaded by this crap. Does this mean you actually believe Bolt n Salad are real japanese names? Isnt the mere incredulity of it enough for you to understand Masashi can never be so crude in the way he delivers things? Do you actually believe Sasuke could be emotionally(or EVEN physically) get attracted to Sakura? Do you feel there has been even one bit of acknowledgement from Naruto for Hinata after she blatantly confessed her 'undying love' in front of the village? Do you believe NH or SS to be compatible? Do you know that Sasuke's and naruto's japanese voice actors and Sasuke's english voice actor Yuri Lowenthal have supported this pairing and call it their favourite couple in the anime? Then why? I dont believe this..Verbatim is such a heartwarming fic with how it was going..dont abandon it please.
| K9 chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
Don't start something you can't least give it up for adoption if you're not going to continue.I'm sorry but I love this story and its sad that its abandend
| Niji-neko chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
Omg love it! There are some sexy scenes! Or maybe it's just me xD but I found myself wondering what was on Sasukes mind when Naruto was crawling towards him x9 please update soon TAT !
Hace a good one :)
| XxxBellaBellaxxX chapter 8 . 10/19/2014
Please please please please update soon, can't wait for more
| NaraLollipop chapter 8 . 7/31/2014
I am in love with your story, literally.
| Sanz0girl chapter 8 . 5/17/2014
update please, this is really awesome