|Reviews for Honestly Harry The Founders Chambers|
| Guest chapter 57 . 1/26
Thank you for your wonderful mention of rape. Now I am going to be disgusted whenever I read about the slythrin students.
| Yami-Guy chapter 53 . 1/26
I say out with the weak and noble harry, lets bring in the strong and confident harry.
| Yami-Guy chapter 29 . 1/26
Words cannot describe my anger right now. You are intentionally creating plot holes to make your story work. It's down right sickening. Now don't get me wrong, it is a great story but I hope you will try and get the story to flow better. It seems your doing another stint of angst and drama as well. Hopefully this time it won't last fifty chapters.
| Nova chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
This a sequel?
| jeffajdad chapter 27 . 11/13/2013
I asked a question recently, but forgot to leave a review. I truely enjoy this writer and am enjoying the stories. Thank you for your efforts.
| AvidReader chapter 30 . 11/9/2013
Yeah, that twist at the end of this chapter is a little disappointing (though it's your own muse you must answer to so don't give it a thought). Thank goodness I'm only now reading through the entire series from the beginning so I won't have to wait at these [expletive deleted] cliffies until I get through a few more books. :-)
I love what your doing with the world. The few typos and continuity issues are more than compensated for by the originality of your approach. Scratch that premise, now that I think about it, since JKR inflicted Cannon with far more than a few continuity issues of her own. ;)
| continental-line chapter 3 . 11/11/2013
Dollarsa$ I think you mean Poundas. Your Americanisam is showing. 8)
| Sammyboy94 chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
Lol,i just thought of something, when your just dateing its tye dad you need to be afraid of (i have afew good storys about those)
When you get married its the mother in laws you need to worrie about...at least thats how it is with my parents
| Osma77 chapter 24 . 10/22/2013
"...idea we place a notebook..." (wince) "...in some common place..." (paranoid wince) "ended up with an extra blank journal somehow" (repeatedly slapping myself in the face going 'dohdohdoh!)
| Osma77 chapter 23 . 10/22/2013
Not entirely sure how that was a "major relationship twist", but then i read a lot of x/x/x stories (multiple pairings with harry). I will agree it was a major relationship milestone, but it was almost mandatory. Three sides of a triangle must to be equal, lest the triangle become unbalanced and falter. (that sounded almost educated!)
| Osma77 chapter 14 . 10/21/2013
I love foreshadowing. So basicly you have a situation with the dresscode where girls that before were heavily covered in robes, suddenly are wearing tight white dress shirts. And this happens at just the right time for Herm (and ginny who previous chapters showed was developing a little early) to start making said shirts too tight. Let alone skirts on brooms.
That is obvious, what might be not so obvious however is the Neville/Susan relationship. Well mannered, somewhat shy, and very traditional Neville is going to be dating the bustiest girl in school, who at 14 already was visible through her robes, and putting said girl in a tight white dress shirt. Poor Neville.
| Osma77 chapter 12 . 10/21/2013
"thank you your... but i feel more comfortable answering to Harry."
Thank you. I really get tired of hearing him walk up to the goblin "king" and saying "just call me harry!" like some idiotic kid.
| Osma77 chapter 8 . 10/21/2013
Ok, this is not only some SERIOUS nitpicking, but also a case where im not 100% sure im right, so don't think im a troll or anything.
Harry was waiting for his owl to come back, and was about to go inside when he heard the beating of wings. While I don't know if this applies to every owl type out there, i've seen an owl up close with a handler. You don't hear ANYTHING when they fly (or try to). The only thing I could hear was the owl's wing hitting the handler in the head, no other sound in the room at all. I've seen this in many stories and it bugs me.
| FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 39 . 10/2/2013
Klingon goblins, oh what an image that create. I can see it now, all the guards running around with Bathlets (That funky two handed curved blade held by the center like a small staff), just like little mini Klimgons.
| GBTtown chapter 71 . 9/26/2013
I am enjoying your stories and this latest one tremendously! I think your solution to the scar/horcrux is unique to any story I have ever read! (This will be a short review as I am concerned I will wear out my exclamation key if I write much more!)