Reviews for A New Path: Volume 1 Commencement
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
Like it so far.
fullhans1 chapter 35 . 10/31/2016
Great story.
DJsaxby16 chapter 14 . 6/10/2016
Ok I'll admit, I thought this whole Mortal Kombat scenario was just convoluted at first, but it was completely worth it just for that fight. I mean if you were to ask me what I think a fight between Superman and Shao Khan would be like, this would be right on the money. Great job!
holliswalley chapter 33 . 6/8/2016
Nonononono you give the mayor the humus and tell the Zohan he stole it from his personal storage
holliswalley chapter 12 . 6/5/2016
You just made a danny phantom reference.
spiritedghost chapter 26 . 8/25/2015
Ah, I always hated Robin so I wouldn't miss him. Nice chapter.
spiritedghost chapter 23 . 8/25/2015
Nice twist if you can't use Faith as the Mayors little girl, use the next best thing... Alicia. Didn't see that coming, but as usual you continue to keep me on my toes with this story.
spiritedghost chapter 22 . 8/25/2015
(rereads the last four (4) sentences and says under his breathe) "Damn."
spiritedghost chapter 21 . 8/25/2015
Just have to say, I love the fact that you paired Faith with Clark. I always wanted to see that. My only concern is, why is it taking so damn long? You know what I mean (smirks and winks) I get the power difference and that has always been a concern when reading Lois and Clark fan fiction. Yes in a moment of passion he could kill her without meaning too. However he does now possess blue K so that would stop that also. Years ago it was theorized that Clark projects an aura around himself and objects that are right up to his skin. Thus his suits (pre reboot of the 52 universe in which the suit is actually made up of Kryptonian battle armor) where protected against friction from flying and so forth. Thus his earlier capes didn't make it against battle damage and frankly from the speed of flight. Now if we take it a step further it is not a stretch to say, that Faith would be fine while making love. Even if he lost control he would not hurt her. His own invulnerability would passed to her do to proximity. Okay stretch that just a bit with skin to skin contact and she would be protected by the aura he projects. It is just a thought and perhaps something you might think about for another story. At any rate once more you surprise me and you are doing a fantastic job with the integration of the two different realities. Thanks for a fantastic story. I would however love to hear your thoughts on what I just postulated to you. The ball as they say is in your court.
Tarix chapter 10 . 8/8/2015
Dunno, this MK part feels kind of foreign to the rest of the story.
LoganAlexander chapter 34 . 1/19/2014
wow basically a copy of smallville and buffy...
LoganAlexander chapter 31 . 1/19/2014
oh right into a falling truck which means she is still alive to come back and do the evil routine and blah blah are you even talking about...let Xander or Giles kill her or something, those 2 at least have to balls to do whats right.
LoganAlexander chapter 30 . 1/19/2014
ok...are you so unoriginal you needed a so called bad guy like alicia who is basically faith especially since you made her a fucking slayer...and wtf was that making her a slayer...if it was possible the council would have already done it by now or some other group...and my god your acting as if alicia is fucking lex luthor and darkseid...shes fucking owning everyone in every slip her a lead bracelet and she cant do god you're a fucking idiot
LoganAlexander chapter 24 . 1/19/2014
ok the dude know he can just laserbeam the fuck out of him right...seriously your clark is fucking weaker than the smallville version.
LoganAlexander chapter 16 . 1/19/2014
im sorry cordy...are you crazy, that whole situation was her the hell is it xanders fault...
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