Reviews for A New Path: Volume 1 Commencement
spiritedghost chapter 26 . 8/25
Ah, I always hated Robin so I wouldn't miss him. Nice chapter.
spiritedghost chapter 23 . 8/25
Nice twist if you can't use Faith as the Mayors little girl, use the next best thing... Alicia. Didn't see that coming, but as usual you continue to keep me on my toes with this story.
spiritedghost chapter 22 . 8/25
(rereads the last four (4) sentences and says under his breathe) "Damn."
spiritedghost chapter 21 . 8/25
Just have to say, I love the fact that you paired Faith with Clark. I always wanted to see that. My only concern is, why is it taking so damn long? You know what I mean (smirks and winks) I get the power difference and that has always been a concern when reading Lois and Clark fan fiction. Yes in a moment of passion he could kill her without meaning too. However he does now possess blue K so that would stop that also. Years ago it was theorized that Clark projects an aura around himself and objects that are right up to his skin. Thus his suits (pre reboot of the 52 universe in which the suit is actually made up of Kryptonian battle armor) where protected against friction from flying and so forth. Thus his earlier capes didn't make it against battle damage and frankly from the speed of flight. Now if we take it a step further it is not a stretch to say, that Faith would be fine while making love. Even if he lost control he would not hurt her. His own invulnerability would passed to her do to proximity. Okay stretch that just a bit with skin to skin contact and she would be protected by the aura he projects. It is just a thought and perhaps something you might think about for another story. At any rate once more you surprise me and you are doing a fantastic job with the integration of the two different realities. Thanks for a fantastic story. I would however love to hear your thoughts on what I just postulated to you. The ball as they say is in your court.
Tarix chapter 10 . 8/8
Dunno, this MK part feels kind of foreign to the rest of the story.
Mojtaba13 chapter 34 . 1/19/2014
wow basically a copy of smallville and buffy...
Mojtaba13 chapter 31 . 1/19/2014
oh right into a falling truck which means she is still alive to come back and do the evil routine and blah blah are you even talking about...let Xander or Giles kill her or something, those 2 at least have to balls to do whats right.
Mojtaba13 chapter 30 . 1/19/2014
ok...are you so unoriginal you needed a so called bad guy like alicia who is basically faith especially since you made her a fucking slayer...and wtf was that making her a slayer...if it was possible the council would have already done it by now or some other group...and my god your acting as if alicia is fucking lex luthor and darkseid...shes fucking owning everyone in every slip her a lead bracelet and she cant do god you're a fucking idiot
Mojtaba13 chapter 24 . 1/19/2014
ok the dude know he can just laserbeam the fuck out of him right...seriously your clark is fucking weaker than the smallville version.
Mojtaba13 chapter 16 . 1/19/2014
im sorry cordy...are you crazy, that whole situation was her the hell is it xanders fault...
Mojtaba13 chapter 10 . 1/19/2014
the mortal kombat crossover was very unnecessary..
Mojtaba13 chapter 7 . 1/19/2014
i get hes weak to magic but wtf does that mean...does it mean is powers just automatically shut off...and if magic works on him then with all the books hes read he must have found some spell or some amulet he can wear to protect himself...what about using technologies...seriously not using all you can for your character...very disappointing...
Blake2020 chapter 12 . 11/26/2013
Great fighting
Blake2020 chapter 11 . 11/26/2013
Nice mortal combat and smallville crossover and buffy as well
Blake2020 chapter 10 . 11/26/2013
Great stuff
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