Reviews for I Don't Want Her, I Want You
Zivyx chapter 37 . 10/5/2014
good for Yuki!
XxRadCouplexX chapter 14 . 5/4/2014
Omg Neru reminds me of myself sooo much it's scary! O.O
S.A.D.L.I.A.R chapter 37 . 2/5/2014
... I don't know where to start.
Honestly, this is really like the fourth story I've read that belonged to you. And I just want to say, I love you.

Every single one of you're story's have either made me cry or smile and laugh like an idiot. But lets stick to this one.
You have no idea how much I adore mother/daughter relationships. But you're probably aware of how little there are of these stories, and I've always for some odd reason (that's usually the case) pictured Rin as a motherly figure to Yuki. And this story, is just wonderful, I'm pretty sure there's a puddle on my desk made of my tears. This chapter, the way Yuki broke down. I love it.
The plot itself is making my head spin. Usually when someone puts little flashbacks and memories all over the place, I usually skip that portion because I normally find it boring. But that isn't the case with this one. You actually managed to get me to read them, which mind you is a HUGE accomplishment.
Right now, I'm hoping you update soon, really I see great plots in stuff and then people just stop updating. Please tell me this isn't the case and school is just keeping you busy or you have a minor writer's block at the moment, I really need to find out what happens next. And I know I'm not the only one who's waiting on that update.
Johnclaw Dragonhelm chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Sorry for not reviewing as soon as I favorited! I was on a phone and I wanted to type this all (it'll be a long one).

I can sum up my feelings as: I LOVE THIS FIC. Like you have no idea. It ranks up there amongst my absolute favorites of all time.

The ups and downs made me want to break down and cry when things went bad. The highs made me smile, and my heart move in real feeling for the characters. It's hard to get emotion in words, but you have done it. And magnificently at that. The pain of losing someone, the fear of someone you rightfully fear, all captured to the letter in these words.

Rin is in a whole new light. Rarely is she ever portrayed as serious as she is here. Her character is believable and amazing, even when she's in the depressed stage. Iroha is perhaps my favorite character, which is surprising because for the longest time, I actually refused to even listen to Iroha. But this, and a few songs, have changed my opinion. And Yuki, god where to start! She's so adorable, but so strong. She's a believable child, in all her thoughts and limited knowledge. I wish I could express all the thoughts and words I have on this!

As for everyone else, they're just as great! If I wrote my thoughts about everyone, I'd be here too long! But the main thing I want to say is that your antagonist (who I will not name here for fear of spoilers) is SOOO well written. Villains are hard to do, but this one...god I hate them, in the good way!

The main thing I want to say is that "DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING THIS!" That is all!
Guest chapter 37 . 11/5/2013
Does Rin love Iroha? Cause I've known since the second chap that Iroha loves Rin (cause I have a good intuition). So... does Rin love Iroha? And when are you gonna put them together. Unless your not, but that would suck.
Guest chapter 23 . 11/4/2013
Deja vĂș Rin: "but you're a close second"
Lolly1o1 chapter 37 . 11/2/2013
Poor Yuki if I was her I would've thought it was my fault too even though it wouldn't have been
Nekofan123 chapter 37 . 10/18/2013
Aww, that was so sweet at the end. I'm really glad Yuki finally got to get her own grief out, and that Rin was the one to provide her the craved comfort. I can't wait to see how this is wrapped up! Do update soon, if you can!
The Reality DumPer chapter 37 . 10/17/2013
You just had to hit me with every chapter now. You've been making me tear up with every chapter lately.
I thought I hated drama. Geez.
Won't the next one be soon?
The Reality DumPer chapter 36 . 10/14/2013
Dang. That was crazy...
Iroha's I love you speech felt spot on...but rushed.
And Yuki becomes mad?
Crazier and crazier. Wroar. Haha.
But I see more trouble with this...
Lolly1o1 chapter 36 . 10/13/2013
Woah major chaos poor Rin having to go through that and poor Yuki trying to help and I knew she would snap one day( ok maybe I didn't think about it ) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOU! Uhhh where did I put my sanity? Dang it! It's so hard to find where I put it but I have school tomorrow so guess I have to start looking for it... then I'll end up losing it again LOL
Nekofan123 chapter 36 . 10/13/2013
Wow, hi there, yandere!Gumi! Didn't see that coming, but it was an awesome twist.

You wrote the suspense perfectly in the chap, it was very nerve-wracking.

Ah, the end is nigh! Great to see Yuki back, and I can't wait to see the exciting conclusion. Once again, thank you for continuing the story!
Lolly1o1 chapter 24 . 10/13/2013
Aria is mean! But I do understand why she's like that so I can't completely hate her
Lolly1o1 chapter 21 . 10/13/2013
Yay!
Lolly1o1 chapter 19 . 10/13/2013
The tears are back!
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