|Reviews for Memento Mori|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
| CurlyTwirlyMir chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
You may not like the book, but you wrote in its style very well. In a lot of these fictions Lennie is still portrayed as challenged and the same as in the book but there is something distinctly different about him. You do not have that, problem, these characters feel spot on, kudos.
I like the way that you started it so we thought George was sitting down next to Lennie, not his grave. The flashback is very sweet and the ending is heart wrenching. "One small man walking a lonely road beside a giant, stumbling shadow of grief and guilt." beautiful.
This is very touching...I hope you got full marks for this. :)