|Reviews for The Connected|
| Gleas chapter 7 . 8/21
It's soap not soup! I actually went to google to figure out if that was some weirdly named thing used for cleaning before the fact that it is a typo registered... If you have time, please do correct such (that's the only one that troubled me so but there are lot of others) :)
| Chase'sGirl19 chapter 2 . 6/1
Lily would had freaked if she found out haha too bad you didnt write that scene. So far im enjoying your story, you did an awesome job with this and sorry for my first review. I accidentally pressed the enter button before i can type D:
| Chase'sGirl19 chapter 1 . 6/1
| LadyOfTheGlen chapter 1 . 2/8
I love this story, I think Remus would be a good guardian for Harry.
| Imaginer.012 chapter 5 . 2/4
That book! Love!
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 7 . 10/28/2014
| wolfnymph1 chapter 4 . 8/13/2014
...you know Ijust realized Vernon sounds alot like Vermin when you say it out loud
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/23/2013
Cute story. It is well written too
| TARDISbluu chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
Oh my God, I am loving this story. Like, really loving it. I'm pretty sure I'm going to be reading straight through the end.
| Trixie's mom chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
Um...hold on here. Strange man shows up in a schoolyard, strikes up a conversation with a six year old, then pulls him in his lap? Where the he** are the teachers?
| mambajama chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
The only word you misspelled thur out the story was the word (soap) not spell soup.
| sagel20th chapter 7 . 6/21/2013
i love this story! so cute!
| Make war not love. war is fun chapter 8 . 5/13/2013
| DoctorPhoenix221B chapter 8 . 5/6/2013
will you write more? I allready read 'The Truth', but will there be more? like, harry's school life?
anyway,... read you soon! D
| XxTokyoGhoulXx chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
Eren is my grandmother's name! I just finished reading dimension father. YOU R AMAZING! Write a sequel! Add more chapters to this too!please u r great.