|Reviews for All Will Be In Order|
| Shuangyao chapter 6 . 8/19
Hello, I am a fan of this work. I wonder if it’s ok to translate it into Chinese. I want to let more fans see it in China, and your name and original address will be attached.
Looking forward to you reply. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/18
That was outstanding. I loved the bit with Lupin working at the grocery store. Ugh. Well done.
| Dreadfulfantasyla chapter 6 . 3/4
just found this ff and had to review it! :)
I just loved how you described Remus character in particular, so very humble and smart. Really liked how you described he manages to make himself effortlessy likeable to everyone and especially to Molly.
Great job :)
| WelcomeToTheAsylum chapter 6 . 10/23/2016
Nicely done. Very real characterisation.
| Aenlu chapter 6 . 5/18/2016
This was an excellent story! You have a nice writing style, and I think your characterizations were spot on. It was also interesting to see the development between Molly and Remus; I don't think I've read a story that looked at that before. I'm looking forward to reading more of the Kaleidoscope series!
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/30/2016
great. Very accurate and you kept it faithful to canon :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
good story, accurate portrayals of the characters and lively authentically english dialogue. A good job overall, though I would've loved to see you divert a bit more from canon and maybe play around more?
anyways thanks :-)
| Charitable Millionaire chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
so i just found this story but am really excited to read it because i adore realistically written sirius black stories (well i also enjoy the silly one too!) and this looks very well and thoughfully written so far! yeah!
| bpax812 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
This chapter is just so how I picture Remus that it is a little ridiculous. Of course, I have few differences in on the little things, but overall just wow..it's actually a little scary. In this chapter the interaction and the strain between Moody and Padfoot is very well done. Most fics do not manage to build the tensions happiness, fears, and hopes between at being together again as subtly you do. I like how you do not force the character or the reader to have to chose why Sirius asks Remus to go with him. People always have different multifaceted reasons behind ideas and actions. Overall, great first chapter!
| abbeybeau chapter 6 . 5/25/2015
This was very good. I never would have thought a story that centered around Molly and Remus's relationship would be one I wanted to read, but I enjoyed this.
| DoraL chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
shimotsuki11, I love your All Will Be in Order and Kaleidoscope. Cannot wait to read the rest of Kaleidoscope II If you ever publish them in hard copy I would like to buy one. Your story is by far my favourite fan fiction for Remus. Thank you for making my favourite HP character more vivid.
I have a few thoughts about your story. Just my personal opinions (I am very loyal to JKR's words) and you have done a great job in creating adorable Remus, Sirius and Tonks.
1. Harry Potter Wiki mentions Lupin lived in "a tumbledown, semi-derelict cottage". It might be more suitable for his finacial status, though I hate to see Remus lived such a horrible place (even worse than the flat in your story).
2. Your Sirius is so gentle for Remus. JKR's is much more restless and I cannot imagine he cooked. And, yes, you made me feel E-V-E-N worse when read the part Sirius died.
3. I almost cried when I read the part when Bill first met Remus. Cannot help thinking how Bill would think one day when Remus is dead and his daugher is dating Remus's son.
4. If I remember correctly, Kingsley in your story was younger than Sirius/Remus (?). I always have a feeling that they were about the same age. Maybe because I think a minister should at least be in his late 30s if not 40s.
You rock, shimotsuki11!
| GinnyPotter6891 chapter 6 . 12/21/2014
Absolutely enjoyed this story! Everyone is n character, your writing very nicely describes surroundings, and the plot keeps one's attention. I'll be starting on "Kaleidoscope" next...
| LillianSev chapter 6 . 11/26/2014
Love it! Definitely looking forward to the sequel (or the story to the prequel, depending on how you look at it). :)
| katherinegrace79 chapter 6 . 7/30/2014
Congratulations on an excellent piece of work. The characterisations here were brilliant and Molly's development over only five chapters was really poignant and true to form. I particularly liked the way that you portrayed Sirius and Remus beginning to mend the cracks of their broken friendship. I like to imagine that this, exactly this story, is what we didn't see in Order of the Phoenix. I'm definitely going to be checking out your other works now, beginning with Kaleidoscope.
Also, thanks for writing in a neat, tidy layout with wonderful grammar and excellent English. Sometimes on , it is so hard to find well-organised stories so thank you, thank you, thank you.
| foolondahill17 chapter 6 . 6/27/2014
This was utterly wonderful. The ending sent warm fuzzies swarming all over me. I just adored each of the characters. Sirius and Remus' friendship was so perfectly reconstructed and Molly's slowly building fondness of Remus was also very well done. I also appreciated the little cameos you've got sprinkled all throughout, like Kingsley's hint about Tonks. I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading whatever else you've got on your profile. Thank you.