Reviews for Keep Trying
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
I'm not familiar with the work this is based on, but I completely enjoyed reading this. Your dialogue is smooth and natural and your imagery is strong and precise. Great work x
Angela Pirate Ryoko chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
Wow. I wanted this story. I came here on a whim to see if there was anything new (there never is) and I didn't realize it but I wanted this very story and here it is, as perfectly perfect as I longed for. You hit everything I love about Ash and Eiji and I was hoping (hoping, hoping!) this would be a kissing story and then it was, though it would've been almost just as good if it wasn't, if that makes any sense. Thank you so much for writing this. I needed it.