good update

Oh right! A review time and I guess this is the very first time that I've ever done one for your works ( since we always meet up and talk about it )

Well, here goes something!
I do not know how do say it but I really like this chapter a lot. Honestly. This slice of life chapter brings interaction between the masters and servants to a level of being intimate and at the same time, a tinge of humor in their conversations.
But that is not the crux of this chapter. As the focus on the group slowly dies down, a rather interesting scene is happening just a few tables away...and I bet that peculiar character is gonna be one of the masters or even servants for this game!
The scene is nicely played, the character that Akemi is noticing brings out a strong sense of mystery and interest (in my opinion).
I can't wait to read the next chapter and also, TBTFTG! Will be waiting for these as well as the other work you have at FictionPress!

This is off to a great start ;) Thanks to all my fellow Singaporeans here in the Fate/stay section in , I'm intrigued to give my own version of the holy grail war a spin now hahaa!

Off to a great start! I really think that you should get more reviews. I love that attention to details and hope the next chapter is just as great.

Excellently written, I especially enjoy that you stuck with the visual novel's style. It's fun to do for a change and I know it can be somewhat difficult (am currently doing the same for an upcoming Fate fic)

And I can see who Lancer is based on the usage of that spear. Odin, yes? That's almost unfair, as Odin is a legitimate god. Like, full blooded. I believe Heroic Spirits must be at least part human and I'm not entirely sure about Odin. I could be really wrong though.

It was a good Master battle as well, Aleister clearly had the advantage though. Still, Ira did all right, but Einzberns were never suited for combat. It seems you stayed true to this. What is odd is that Aleister had Mystic Eyes. Either a Sorcery Trait or he managed to...find a pair? lol.

Keep up the good work.

nice story. I try myself on a story of the Fate universum but is i can't write like the visuel novel and that you made this so good I admire this. keep up the good work.

P.s: sorrry for my bad english skills

Pretty good story, I think this is going to be a great story. Keep on going and don't give up!

Let me guess servant assassin appeared and sato the master. Finally a female protagonist, hope she can deal with life and death situation.