Reviews for Chaos Descending
J-Wolf7 chapter 10 . 2/6
You know I read from chapter 1 through 10 and I like how it goes (Somewhat random, but good). Since Ash liking this world, but it will lead Ash to his hardest decision of his life. Ash either stay in Eqeastria or going back home in the Pokemon world. There are some pros and cons between worlds. This is Ash's decision and his decision alone, no help from his friends nor his Pokemon to make him decide. If that ever happened, well you gotta figured out self to how to end off, or set up the poll to make Ash choice (After "Ash's Cutie Mark" poll ended, which should've ended sooner or later.) The choice you choose for the story and Ash's choice.
ThaDerpyZoroark chapter 10 . 5/28/2015
Well this is all over the place, but I like it. Plus I love the Ash x Fluttershy pairing, it's freaking adorable. But for the love of god don't put Pokeshipping, please don't use an over used aspiring, and its a pairing that doesn't work and not cute unlike Ash x Fluttershy.
trninjakiller chapter 2 . 6/13/2014
Guest chapter 10 . 3/20/2014
please update
the core of justice chapter 9 . 3/21/2014
the core of justice chapter 10 . 2/11/2014
Night Blaze-Bringer of Harmony chapter 10 . 11/29/2013
Please update! This story is great, but it has been over a year since you last updated, and I've gotta say that a cliff-hanger is not the best way to end a story.
TheKingOfPikachusAndDragons chapter 10 . 11/21/2013
next chapter
Mindfuck beats chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Random but funny as heck
Star Bit chapter 10 . 9/2/2013
I need more it is awesome
Megaphantom chapter 10 . 7/24/2013
I hope you update soon.
Firehedgehog chapter 10 . 7/11/2013
heh heh heh
Megaphantom chapter 10 . 4/4/2013
I hope the update comes out soon.
WildCard-Yes Man chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Whats this? A good Pokemon Fan fic? Please... Continue...
Appledash99 chapter 10 . 11/22/2012
Great story...,but are you gonna finish that?
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