|Reviews for Crystal Clear|
| connielkm chapter 5 . 5/16/2016
My bet is the father calls.
| dan26mitchell chapter 5 . 1/11/2015
Love the story please update soon.
| bird chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
im bird,i'm a lezbian, watching lez movies is not really my thing, but the L word (Sharmen especially) have awaken me and my interests on stories like this. i've watched the l word just last week. My friends were talking about this drama series wen i was in college. actually i havnt done watching it yet..im still in episode 4, and honestly the only reason why im still watching it now coz i was left hanging at the end of the season (Sharmen) LOVE was so true.i was wondering why did they stopped the story about carmen and shane just like that..its very funny coz it made me unsettled for almost a week now..ive been thinking wat happened to carmen after being left alone by shane at the altar. and since then ive been searching on the internet hoping i could find a soft copy of a book that continues the sharmen story after the failed wedding. and i just read your version of it..and i am truly fascinated and felt alive again wen i read crystal clear, i might accept if carmen dont want to be with shane anymore becoz what she has done to her was so horrible...but i still wanna know what happened to them, whether its a happy ending or not, i dont care, what i care is i need to give my self a satisfaction..i'v neither read nor watched a drama series/movie/novel before that fascinates me so much...Sharmen really touches the deepest part of me, i would reli love to know what happens next...and honestly i reli love your version of the l word (sharmen) continuation of the story...it might be too late,,but if you happen to read this, i would really appreciate it heartily if you will continue your version..please...thank you so much
bird (November 14, 2014)
| bird chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
was carmen attempted suicide?
my God..is there any chapters to come?i cant just stop here,..my mind would not probably settle with this...anyway thank you so much...i can wait for a day...
| bird chapter 4 . 11/13/2014
was carmen really serious about going to make things work between them just like that?i think that was just part of her plan to get revenge...gosh...u r reli a good writer...and actually i didnt catch up lil things in here especially about max having a baby...i skipped other chapters 'cause i was looking forward on what episode or season carmen would show up again...thank you so much...
| bird chapter 3 . 11/13/2014
my God, thank you so much for this...
| anitarakel chapter 5 . 4/2/2014
O.O looove it! Please, please, pretty please, continue writing!
| anonymous chapter 5 . 12/22/2013
Wtf is the person on the phone saposto b her dad?
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/6/2013
Very good, are we gonna gave an update soon? :-)
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2013
This story was one if the best I have ever read! How disappointing that it was never finished. I wished I had been born sooner so that I could have been a part of the active Sharmen days when TLW was still on.
| shellby chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
I don't usually read fanfictions but I can't stop reading yours please post another chapter!
| Are you kidding chapter 5 . 12/30/2012
please continue the story! so many mysteries to solve ... you cann't leave us like this
| Jessica chapter 5 . 12/5/2012
Where is the rest ? :)
| Refresh.7 chapter 5 . 11/29/2012
Before I start my rambling, I would like to say that this is MARVELOUS. I had been a long time fan of TLW, but even so, the finale left so many open-ended questions and my heart was not at rest. I watched it well before I discovered fanfiction, and when I finally did, it took me a while to remember TLW was unresolved for me. Of course I shipped Sharmen like a mad woman, and when Carmen made a small cameo in season 6, my heart restricted, just like the small mention of her in season 5 when Shane was talking to the bride.
But I digress. Your story is exactly how I would want TLW to continue if it did. Although it the storyline revolves around my favorite ship, I find it utterly refreshing to have the rest of the issues resolved. The way you write the characters are completely ON-POINT and I hear their voices in my head very clearly. It honestly is like watching TLW where it left off. I really do hope you continue with this, because I don't want another loose end in my life. Thank you though. Thank you thank you for finishing what Ilene could not.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/21/2012
Update soon! 3