Reviews for Just like me
RadiantStar30 chapter 2 . 9/26/2015
More, please! (Wait that sounded like Ben lol) I never found myself craving for a story this much. Oh come on, you should write more. This story could go on and on. It's not just the sex scenes, you also wrote Ben's emotions so nicely. You are an amazing writer. You also made me love Bevin for the first time.
I've decided to ignore a few mistakes that I spotted in the second chapter, since it was too good. I know it's been a long time but maybe you could write again?
I absolutely loved it. Great job!
RadiantStar30 chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Perfect! Absolutely perfect! I'm so faving this story! I haven't read such a perfect rape story in a long, long time. I don't appreciate rape culture, but as a literary piece, this was too good. I absolutely love Albedo/Ben, but that's not the reason I love this story. I love it because this story is nearly flawless. It's beautifully written, very realistically. I couldn't spot any mistakes either.
You are a genius.
RuraScarlet chapter 2 . 8/29/2015
im sad but wnat moar

pls moare
NachtNight chapter 2 . 5/9/2015
Oh my god...I just want to try reading some Albedo/Ben fic. At first I really hate this fan fiction, it was too much for me, too much violence. But I hate to admit that I want to know what will happen next and decided to read chapter 2. And...gosh...I started to feel additiont, even if my other side doesn't wanted to. It was like this fan fiction was Albedo and I was Ben, I want more and I can't stop thinking how the next chapter will be. So, I am here, begging you. Please...I want more chapter. I will be very sad if you stop writing this fan fiction.T_T
*internal screaming *
Dracofides chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
I am ashamed to say I enjoy this. So much.

Please please update?
roseangel013 chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
I absolutely love it. Update please!
thor94 chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
yep i want more.
wth more toy, milking, etc.
MySweetYaoi49 chapter 2 . 11/24/2014
This was perfect! XD I have to be insane but I have to have more of this! ;D Every excellent writing with a plot line that is sort of original makes for one amazing story! One or two more chapters then all will be wonderful am I right? :)
The Stranger chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
*gets on knees in begging stance*
Please make another chapter!
pokepals chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
Make a sequal for this story. Pleassssssse.
roxelle34 chapter 2 . 5/14/2014
AsorenRM chapter 2 . 4/20/2014
truthfully i have seen some good fanfic but by far this one as the most smexy!
dieya105 chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
This story is amazing and so fgehrjkghbuhbf11!ONE1
Please update this soon, I really want to know what else happens.
(this is also the only ben 10 fanfic worth reading, especially with Albedo in it)
YuugiYY chapter 2 . 4/11/2014
More, please more. And i am not giving you ideas, its bad enough i like stuff like this.
Mislagnissa chapter 2 . 4/8/2014

You have written one of the most horrifying stories in the Ben 10 category. You've masterfully woven together themes of body horror, psychological horror, incest, sexual abuse, domination and sadomasochism. Albedo, trapped in an alien body and tormented by strange urges he cannot control, is drawn to the identical twin he blames for all of his suffering. He inflicts upon the poor Ben agonizing sexual abuse and derives a sadistic pleasure from dominating and torturing the boy. Ben, meanwhile, begins breaking under the torture, no doubt already unhinged by years of constantly fighting and running away from evil people who have been trying to chop his arm off, made even worse by the fact that his tormentor has his face like some sort of Jungian shadow reflecting everything he rejects about himself.

All I can say is that you, dear author, have bright future in writing horror.
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