|Reviews for Donoterase Reborn|
| LD chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
This is a really promising story, one of the better fics I've read here.
| anonymouse2u chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
I can't believe you haven't posted this at missingpieces. You should!
| Maiya chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Please, please, please, on with the rest. It's a great story!
| Acacia Juless chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Keep going and going. This is one of my favorite stories!
| Imogen chapter 6 . 7/29/2012
I'm enjoying this!
| PhenyxArises chapter 5 . 2/7/2012
Oh for Ocee's sake, please tell me that you are going to be adding more very soon. I never ever ever (infinity) thought I'd type this but ... I really want to see Miss P and Broots fall in love! HA! And what wiill old Jarod say to that?
| PhenyxArises chapter 4 . 2/7/2012
Oh daddy Parker. Great job. I wish the show had taken this route.
| PhenyxArises chapter 3 . 2/7/2012
A short, wonderful chapter, always good to see Sydney and Jarod interacting, tension and love and resentment and guilt all combined. I love POV, it's so well done!
| PhenyxArises chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
I'm going to be straight with you that I'm totally not a Broots fan but I like him in YOUR story very much. He's a very tender father on the show even if he is an idiot geek and that same tenderness comes through in his interactions with Miss Parker even though he isn't a father in this story. Bald or not, I think after the hell Miss Parker has witnessed, the evil, good looking bad people she knows, that she could appreciate Broots' charming tenderness that you've written so well here.
| PhenyxArises chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
That is different, and although I'm having some problems getting my brain to accept a Parker/Broots ship, I think in a vulnerable state, Miss Parker would see the man, and not the geek. We know she respects him, she said so. The writing is very good, fast paced action. I already like this more than the original episode! And that's just chapter one! Keep going.
| planet p chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
As to the pairing, there aren't a whole lot of them around, are there? So, good on you for trying something different! Broots needs love, too.
As to chapter one: Quite a nice chapter, for a first chapter. The only line I found somewhat awkward was... "Let's go," I said, getting up from my chair and taking him toward where they stuck young Jarod... It was really just the "stuck" that seemed a little ungainly. Perhaps something like "they'd temporarily housed" would improve the flow a little, but it's your story so it's totally okay.
Quite a bizarre thought, for Miss P, I would agree.
So, we'll see what future chapters bring...