|Reviews for Daybreak: Part I|
| Silverwingzz chapter 5 . 3/26
I’m gonna stop your story here because you obviously didn’t get all of your information right. I was gonna say in it in your previous story but I’ll just say here, Obito was the one that helped itachi not madara, he was to old and weak to be able to do any of that in the first place, but you wouldn’t know that since you didn’t look.
| Susnsmsh chapter 32 . 2/11
Lol son of a...I assumed this would have a real ending. What a dang let down.
| JustDusty chapter 3 . 10/19/2020
I liked it better when it was just Mikoto. Every scene with Naruto so far is just way too cringy. In the end, he's still a child seeking attention
| multifandom-fanfic-writer chapter 1 . 6/4/2020
| BTB chapter 32 . 5/13/2020
Really well written. If I was going to attempt to adopt it, I'd like to talk with the author concerning his thoughts on the direction it should take. I'm sure they had an idea where and how they wanted it to go - it's a matter of working the various personalities into the mix.
So Aketsuki has six bijou, Kumo, two, Danzo, one - the stolen six-tail. Considering Konaha's general ignorance in sealing; After Minato, Jiraya, the Sandame a distant third, Kakashi barely competent... Orochimaru was probably not as skilled as Sandame. Danzo's people may have another hidden fuinjutsu tech that would come out in the next book. Never mind the inevitable confrontation between Naruto, Hinata and their peers in the cannon Konoha-twelve. Then there's the Ryuchi Cave resistance, coming into play. This would be very interesting.
| Amoone1 chapter 32 . 4/18/2020
Loved the story. A true disappointment the story will never be finished.
| N991029 chapter 3 . 3/4/2020
Three chapters in and you killed one of my favorite characters. How could you hurt my heart like this?
| thebibliophilerises chapter 32 . 3/1/2020
FUCK, this is good. And there isn't any more... but what *is* here is an absolute gift:) Thank you for this wonderful story!
| Guest chapter 32 . 8/15/2019
Why are you leaving it on a cliffhanger and purposefully not continue the sequel like what the hell man
| naruath chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
I have to say this has been one of the better fanfic that I have ever read. I know it’s been years but I’d love to see what you would come up with next.
| palmtreehead chapter 23 . 5/14/2019
Oh man that is so horribly sad. I somehow forgot that Mikoto’s eyes could solve Itachi’s blindness. At least Hiashi is being a good father. Thanks for sharing
| palmtreehead chapter 22 . 5/14/2019
Very clever. I really like that you’ve shown Sasuke struggle with his dark tendencies but gave him the chance to realise he does love his family more than power before it was too late. I’m also enjoying the way he’s actually winning allies by being nice, and it makes sense cos he’s had some pretty drastic reasons to change his behaviour. Thanks for sharing
| palmtreehead chapter 19 . 5/11/2019
Wow again! Fantastic AU, can’t believe I managed to forget Mikoto as the other powerful player on the scene and awesome to have Mito break the Edo Tensei. Thanks for sharing
| palmtreehead chapter 18 . 5/11/2019
Wow great couple of chapters. Love Hinata’s progress in winning Naruto over and also defeating Sakura, as well as Gaara reaching out to her. Also the way you are keeping Sasuke slightly selfish but still kind of innocent is great - the way he thinks Itachi is lying about the Mangekyo sharingan is really interesting. Thanks for sharing
| palmtreehead chapter 12 . 5/9/2019
Woo loving Naruto’s kindness to both Hinata and Gaara, especially the way he’s a bit dazed at how long she’s liked him. thanks for sharing