Reviews for Daybreak: Part I
Amoone1 chapter 32 . 4/18/2020
Loved the story. A true disappointment the story will never be finished.
N991029 chapter 3 . 3/4/2020
Three chapters in and you killed one of my favorite characters. How could you hurt my heart like this?
thebibliophilerises chapter 32 . 3/1/2020
FUCK, this is good. And there isn't any more... but what *is* here is an absolute gift:) Thank you for this wonderful story!
Guest chapter 32 . 8/15/2019
Why are you leaving it on a cliffhanger and purposefully not continue the sequel like what the hell man
naruath chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
I have to say this has been one of the better fanfic that I have ever read. I know it’s been years but I’d love to see what you would come up with next.
palmtreehead chapter 23 . 5/14/2019
Oh man that is so horribly sad. I somehow forgot that Mikoto’s eyes could solve Itachi’s blindness. At least Hiashi is being a good father. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 22 . 5/14/2019
Very clever. I really like that you’ve shown Sasuke struggle with his dark tendencies but gave him the chance to realise he does love his family more than power before it was too late. I’m also enjoying the way he’s actually winning allies by being nice, and it makes sense cos he’s had some pretty drastic reasons to change his behaviour. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 19 . 5/11/2019
Wow again! Fantastic AU, can’t believe I managed to forget Mikoto as the other powerful player on the scene and awesome to have Mito break the Edo Tensei. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 18 . 5/11/2019
Wow great couple of chapters. Love Hinata’s progress in winning Naruto over and also defeating Sakura, as well as Gaara reaching out to her. Also the way you are keeping Sasuke slightly selfish but still kind of innocent is great - the way he thinks Itachi is lying about the Mangekyo sharingan is really interesting. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 12 . 5/9/2019
Woo loving Naruto’s kindness to both Hinata and Gaara, especially the way he’s a bit dazed at how long she’s liked him. thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 11 . 5/9/2019
Lovely scenes with Hinata, I’m sad that Naruto thinks she doesn’t like him but I like you’ve given him a way to help her while keeping everyone in character. Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 20 . 3/4/2019
Siriusly i dont get it. What kind of delusion makes you people think that Danzo can make the vilage monstrously strong. He ordered the massacre of the clan who runs the entire police force for gods sake.
Guest chapter 32 . 12/18/2018
Thank you for this awesome tale.
FelineCube chapter 26 . 10/3/2018
Damn, nice plot twist!
FelineCube chapter 16 . 10/3/2018
Holy crap this is both hilarious and strangely cute. 9/10 for this chapter.
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