Reviews for Daybreak: Part I
GoldenHorde chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
yay, this is good start. loving the 'calm before the storm feel'
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
yippee, hooray, whoo-hoo! The sequal is here! And it starts off great! Very amusing and well written, humorous too! Keep up the good work!
shouldabeenadog chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Formating! Oh For God's Sake! Please format!
kitsuneluvuh chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
There are no line breaks. I can't read this!
Torimouto chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Luckily, my email was open when this popped up. Umm, you might want to check on this because it's just one huge paragraph and I'm hoping that it's just a fanfiction formatting fuck up and it wasn't supposed to be shown like this...
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