Reviews for Naruto: Shinobi of Lust
Guest chapter 22 . 8/15
You need to finish this fanfiction
gtl chapter 1 . 8/10
this fic is a waste of time. no planing,no buldup and bad waste.
zoran.hamzic chapter 22 . 7/29
please continue this story i love it so much!
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 22 . 7/27
this really needs to be continued, it was, and still is, one of my all time favorite fics on this site. and I REALLY wish you would update this. clearly your still active on the site. and you haven't listed this as discontinued, so I ask of you to please consider updating this sometime soon.
Spidey2 chapter 22 . 7/23
HOTT! Keep going! And may I use this bloodline in a few stories in writing?
Guest chapter 22 . 7/23
Show that bloke not to get them knickers in a bunch says i am
Guest chapter 12 . 7/14
It's okay but I have a feeling you abandoned the story seeing you haven't updated in like I don't know 3 years
Kevek chapter 1 . 7/13
Well, it's a great story so far but seeing how you haven't updated for 3 years...are you done with it?
ShintaroSenpaiKisaragi chapter 20 . 6/19
Ehh...all I can say is...5/10
Guest chapter 22 . 6/13
you should continue this fanfic
Guest chapter 22 . 5/27
wish you would continue it
narutoyugitofuu chapter 22 . 5/14
Add Kushina. He can revive her somehow and he has already shown he isn't against it many times.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/14
Make the other chapters fast .ok .,,,,,,,i like the story rwally much
shadowfox18 chapter 21 . 5/10
The idea I good. It's the execution that needs work. Firstly, your grammar is horrible. I recommend running it through a grammar check. Most word processors have one. Secondly, you need to check your work to make sure it's consistent. For example, how could Naruto pinch ino's ass when they were supposedly sitting in a chair? Also, ino wouldn't get a pudgy stomach after only a few hours.
jacob chapter 22 . 4/22
Make more for this story
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