Reviews for Broken
Live To Ride chapter 6 . 11/19/2012
This is a pretty good story. Please update soon. :)
ozlady80 chapter 2 . 3/12/2012
Well the first chapter was good kinda rushed but good ummmm they dont put family especially a father and son in the same platoon but for this story purposes its all good!
ozlady80 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Interesting start
Theprettydancer chapter 4 . 2/2/2012
great chapter! I can't wait to read more, please update soon. :)
Theprettydancer chapter 2 . 2/2/2012
great chapter!
Theprettydancer chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
good start
Sleeping Average-Looking chapter 3 . 1/30/2012
Name: Georgina Call

Nickname: Gina



Description of what they look like: Wavy black hair down to the end of her ribs, hazel eyes with long eye lashed, the same nose as Embry, short (5ft2") womanly figure but has a flat stomach and a tongue,a septum (the bit between your nostrils) and a belly button piercing.

Do you want them to phase/end up with a wolf?

I think Collin should imprint on her- she can be into bands such as (asking alexandria, devil wears prada, miss may I, A day to remember etc) and so could Collin?

A back-story about them.

She's Embry's cousin, he was like a big brother to her until he started phasing, she gets fed up goes to Sams house to confront him and gets imprinted on. You can make up the rest! :)
ladyMiraculousNight chapter 3 . 1/1/2012
Name: Mika Alexandria Gage

Nickname: (optional) meek alex or Gage

Gender: female

Age: 16

Description of what they look like: black/brown hair- gray/green eyes- short 5'1" - hair always in a ponytail -bangs long and cover right eye- nails painted black- black clothes - always has a black zip up sweatshirt on- crocks never sneakers- (sorry im just going with what I look lol if you want to change any of it or add something or not use it all your story :) )

Do you want them to phase/end up with a wolf? No thank you with the phasing part but ending up with a wolf is okay "shrug"

A back-story about them- umm... Is a loner, doesn't like er family at all but everyone else seems to which has caused her not to have friends- always seems to be listening to David Bowie, Bryan Adams, bob sneider,rolling stones, and Bon jovi- A student - never goes anywhere without a book and is always reading- likes walking in the woods and just getting away from society for a little while- every other thing that comes out of get mouth is sarcastic- doesn't like tv but if she must it's psych, bones, yugioh- justie league or something with superheros, likes reading comics - ( thats all i got sorry' i trĂ­es to put in everything i could think of..)

Pale face or Quilette? Pale face

Okay if she doesnt work for you its okay you dont have to use her and i wont be offended :) i really like this story and hope all Your stress gets lessened so you can update :) moving sucks but who knows right? I hope everything works out :) till next time