Reviews for A Lesson In Desire
Smileyking1975 chapter 1 . 1/16
Loved it, but instead of the Gaston Leroux novel, or original movie with Lon Chaney, I was imagining the taped play at the Al Hirschfeld/field? theater with David Staller as The Phantom and Elizabeth Walsh as Christine. He tells her at one point, "Unbind your passion, Christine!" and she says, "If I do not comply?" He says, a bit darkly, "You cannot refuse me!" Later on, they are singing Don Juan together, but the music is too overwhelming for her. David Staller was one of the "cuter" phantoms.
Amelia Mariee chapter 1 . 8/24/2017
Love Erik
ChinaDoll320 chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
This story was amazing. I can totally imagine this happening in the original novel (it's something I wish HAD happened in cannon). Thank you for writing this. It was satisfying on so many levels.
SpookyMormonHellDream chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
Dayum, nicely done. Beyond the fact that your style of prose/dialogue and your imagery is stunning and eloquent, this story was dark and heated and just very well executed. It was fascinating to read this from both their perspectives, to see both hesitance and compliance and the hint of confidence amid the guilty confusion from Christine, the command and some smug confidence and warring desires from Erik. This is definitely a different side to their story, and while you directly confronted and discussed topics that are usually considered sensitive, you did so very well in a way that stayed true to their respective characters while also exploring further possibilities that, in my opinion, are not outside the realm of reality in some ways. Also, on a slightly more humorous note, I generally don't like phics where Erik spanks the monkey, but this story is definitely the exception. You kept it classy, and I am thoroughly impressed. Great work! :D
Brp chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
You are a talented writer...

Stop fearing what critics will complain about...

Write more stories...
Brp chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Oh my God and Jesus...
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Love it ! These stories are perfect for big POTO fans ! Keep making more please these are absolutely amazing !
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
It was simply AMAZING! I felt myself burning with the words, I could hear the music, hear Erik's voice, feel wat Christine was feeling... It was great! It was sublime... There is no words in the whole world to explain what this tale have done with me... Amazing!
amyrobotnick chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
I would just like to say how talented and beautiful your writings and novels are on here.

Though i have read almost every single one, not able to get enough , i chose this one to write you because this one is the very first of your stories i have read, and ever since it has had a great deal of importance to me.

I have never truly liked "fanfiction" (Though how you write your novels, i forget that it even is fanfiction) for phantom of the opera, but this took my breathe away.

How you describe things and the flow of your story is amazing, flawless down to the little details people usually overlook.

You are true to characters and i never ever feel like the characters are unjustly portrayed in your novels and every conversation, aloud or not, is just flawlessly executed and leaves me wanted to read more every time.

It's romance for the soul, and entertainment for the mind.

And all of this accomplished by such an ambitious women with three children no less!

I am very impressed and awed by your works brought to life here.

With much admiration,

A phantom of the opera enthusiast.
starkreactor chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
*shallow breathing* Oh my goooooooooooooooood. That was one of the hottest things I've ever read... ever, I think. Fuck. Good job, my friend.
MissChrystalline chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Sweet and sensual. Very nice
Mrs. BRP chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
O_o! Now that's teasing!
the-laughingstock chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
*slams hands rhythmically* sequel sequel sequel! Hooooooot! Wow! Yeah, a sequel would be pretty sweet (Christine says "next time" so therefore, there HAS to be a next time!)
Great story!
wrena chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Beautiful sensual erotica. Unbridled passion. Consuming emotions. Superb writing as always.
Phanma chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
wow, that was HOT
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