|Reviews for His immortal kiss|
| The kid chapter 1 . 10/15
Please go back over your older work it needs attention. The spelling and grammar are atrocious here; though it could be much much worse. I've read My Immortal.
Please note: this type of foreshadowing isn't necessary when one of the tags for your story is "romance." We readers are able to make the leap mentally what you mean.
| Jaz chapter 3 . 10/24/2014
Please update soon I love this story!
| lunabloodmoon666 chapter 3 . 5/9/2013
this is really good and i hope to read more soon :)
| musicluver246 chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
love this story :)
| Allanna Stone chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
longer chapters, pleasy sneezy? oh and update soon!
| LittleValerious chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
aaaaahhhh! Continue please!
| MeAndMyFavoritePetDog chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
I HATE THIS SHIT.
| Slytherin Studios chapter 3 . 2/3/2012
Your story sounds interesting, can't wait for the next chapter.
| SexyKnickers chapter 3 . 11/21/2011
Ok, write more, longer chapters and update soon because I need to read more.
| A Vampire Stole My Heart chapter 3 . 10/27/2011
The chapters are a little TOO short but it's an OK story
| Liasmani chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
Try to make each chapter long at like 4,000 words (20 pages or so.) Make sure you also use a spell/grammar check.