Reviews for Misstep in the Right Direction |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent first exam idea! I hope you return to this story, I've been enjoying it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really tired of this focus on Ramen in almost all Naruto fanfics, it's already starting to disgust me, even more so when they make him act like classic Naruto which is almost completely retarded. |
![]() ![]() W rizz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss this Fic... :c |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love love this even though it's unfinished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was slightly put off by the idea of Co-Kage, even if it was only a joke. Hinata never once show an interest in being Hokage and the whole situation seemed to simply forcefully promote some kind of equality in everything. That's a small gripe, though. The story, even with sad parts, is simply FLUFFY. I read it and I have butterflies in my belly as if it was me who is in love. Sweet and cute, that's what it is (is it wrong for a guy to like this kind of story?). |
![]() ![]() Great story just needs many updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Iruka! You go get that ramen girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Damn. And I really liked Tenten too... That sucks... I also appreciate how Neji's fatalism royally b8t him in the ass. Poor Kaede. She didn't deserve getting screwed over like that... Seeing Iruka taking up missions and with Ayame is pretty win though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally, I DESPISE the general anti-OC stance in fan fiction. I mean, what's the point 9f n9t add8ng 8n someone YOU want who wasn't in canon? It's such an underrated and underappreciated aspect of the genre... But, meh. Let ppl be pointlessly irrational I guess. Stupid, but oh well. Does motivate to wanna add them in my own stories to spite the ignorant and intolerant masses and fandom . Sealing Naruto is best Naruto in my view. It just works. My favorite Sealing Naruto will f9rever be from 'Seals Are Easy, People Are Hard' though. Incidentally, that Hinata is also one of my favorites for her... feistiness. Hell, she even beat Lee... after kicking Neji in the nuts for being especially mean to Naruto. That Kakadhi even observed how she seriously thought about murdering him because he wouldn't let her see Naruto after the events in the Forest of Death. Point is, that Hinata was AWESOME. Th8s Hinata is less feisty and scheming to get Naruto and more classic dere n sweet, but still an awesome Hinata. Sticking Neji and Sasuke on the same team though? ...Oh boy. Second story I've seen where Naruto has Guy for a team Sensei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...The cuteness was strong with this one... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Why is it that damn near no one, n9t even Kishimoto-san, can write Sasuke to be anything but flat and irritating!? ...But meh. This NaruHina is so damn cute! |
![]() ![]() Great story needs a lot of updates. Story has been updated for a very long time, needs lots ot updates. |
![]() ![]() A lot of fun to read hope you come back to finish it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished this chapter and I hope, that you succeeded in your educational program and soon will find time to continue the story. |