Reviews for Misstep in the Right Direction
Lucem Yoru chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Nice, really like it.
alchemists19 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
A great story that i cant wait to read more of
Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
What a cute start! Keep going!
Okazaki323 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
A very good start
Skwiziks chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I still worry that you fill your plate with too much. But it's all interesting and engaging so I really can't fault you. I am eager to see where this one goes.
Chewie Cookies chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
AWESOME! This one has a lot of potential to be really good!

Keep up the good work!
Leaf Ranger chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Hmmmm. Interesting. Very interesting.

I think this will be fun. XP
Hammerchuckery chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Cute. Why not remove those POV indicators? They're distracting. The scene from Hinata's POV didn't really add much and rehashed what was just narrated.
alethiophile chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Looks interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. I have ideas like this all the time, but only a few of them ever coalesce into proper story paths that I have an idea where to go with; this should be fun.
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Good concept going on here, keep it up. Should be interesting.
Left for Milk chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Sooooooooooo fluffy (-)

I really liked this and you better update soon :P
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