Reviews for Rise of the Forgotten
Commander Bear chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I like it so far, and I love your use of Alecto (totally my favorite monster) but Nico's speach just seemed a bit... stiff. It wasn't as casual as he is in the books
FyreFlyte22 chapter 20 . 3/29/2013
Honestly, I liked this story very much. There were moments when I had thought that this story would not be as excellent, but I have to admit, you exceeded my expectations. I was at first confused with why you chose to include Cyrus in the beginning, because he didn't appear in the later chapters, but I understand where his part will be. All in all, this was an excellent story, and I hope to read some more of your works.
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 11 . 2/25/2013
Oh no!
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 7 . 2/25/2013
"But luckily for the gods, I'm good with games," he muttered, pressing down on the accelerator. "And I'm even better with shadows."
Nico nodded grimly. "It's a game alright. A game of shadows."'
I love these lines!
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
Yay! I love how Nico stays single for me!
Road Lizard chapter 20 . 2/24/2013
Aw, now that was just a tease!

And now I have to wait five days for more!

I've been waiting for this new series of yours for months, and I'm pumped that you're about to publish.

Good job on this little teaser. It left me wanting more.
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 5 . 2/24/2013
But..I thought Hades stopped shadow travel ( the beginning of the chappie)
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
I wanna join them! :)
conjure-at-your-own-risk chapter 20 . 2/24/2013
Well. That was certainly filled with butterflies and rainbows.

I take it that you had fun with that ending?
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
Ooh I love the plot development
And I have a crush on you Nico! How are you so dense! :P And you call others dense...
DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Yay I love Nico and his adventures!
Only 155 reviews? I think not :P
I want Nico to take me to CHB :)
LoreleiJubilation chapter 9 . 2/18/2013
I love the story so far, and it's totally like Apollo to add a feature like that.
The Perfect Mary Sue Killer chapter 19 . 11/25/2012
I stayed up until 3 AM reading this on my dsi. I cannot tell you how thrilling this was. The twist(s) at the end were perfect. I was expecting Nyx!

Not exactly like Riordan's writing style. Because it was even better.

I plan on making a list of 100 of the best fics on the archive. Then again, there are probably only 100 good fics on the archive...

I am working on a House of Hades fic, so please read it when it comes out.
Mission to Marzipan chapter 19 . 8/27/2012
What?! You ended it on a cliffhanger?!

You are very, very mean. Let that be noted.

I liked how you wrapped this up, using Hestia as a vessel for the explanations of what went on in the story. You kept most of the mysteries up to the very end, which was excellent. That's not always easy to do.

I think this places you very well to start on your new series. Nice job.

Marz.
ChristieLaurenn chapter 19 . 8/26/2012
What happenned next?

Favorite line from chapter;
What if they decided they didn't like his face, and it was better to melt it?
That was too funny

I absolutely adored this story.
It was perfect.
Hope you continue writing ;D ]

-ChristieLaurenn

P.S. Check out my one-shot
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