Reviews for Sweet Smile
CocoBlueberry1279 chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
THIS WAS SO SAD DDDDDDDD: I don't really ship Mitsuru and Akihiko (I'm sorry) But I'm REALLY REALLY sad for Mitsuru : why u do dis?
Namiro chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Mitsuru don't deserve loss! But maybe it's because she was very difficult to get? maybe.
Satsuki Hareta chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
I can relate with Mitsuru. Although, i can't help it but form my hand into fist and sometimes bumping it on my desk.

That was sad. At first I thought she was 'Oh well, I don't care.' or like 'guys in the world'. Mitsuru deserves love too. Akihiko, y u careless? D:
xxx chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Actually I really like you're writting style 0.o ... But I feel like crying after reading it.. Do you think you could write stories about mitsuru and akihiro their my most favorite pairing T_T.. Thx...
Threya Midnight chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Aww...:'( that was sad. Maybe you could add a new chapter where Mitsuru meets Minato and gets over know, so that Mitsuru at least gets a good ending...Good job!
Jonaleepuff chapter 1 . 10/21/2011 all sorts of brilliant. I enjoyed reading this from Mitsuru's point of view. I never thought of Minako to be a homewrecker, for a better lack of term hahaha.

Just some typos:


loosing losing


their there [but there was a nagging feeling..]

Mistsuru girlfrield [Mitsuru, this is my girlfriend, Minako.]


Some lines I particularly loved:

"There was relief in her face, but I could still see the doubt in her eyes."

""I love you." Was all I said.

There was a moment of silence. "I love you too?" Was his reply."

I could just feel the emotion in these lines! The ending was so incredibly sad. I'd love it if you expanded on this!