Reviews for Stay
Polka-Dotted Strawberries chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
SO SAD :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
lisaOpine chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
This too much 4 me :'( natsume's dead? Wahahaha plz update soon :'(
pwenie chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Wow so interesting :0 nice inspiration
ClearEyes chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I LOVE YOUR STORY! So dramatic XD

Keep on writing it, PLEASE! If you don't, i might kill you...

JK

But please keep writing it! Loved it!
Mei Vir D. Ripper chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
HELL YEAH.! GO TEAM C.! GO AWESOMENESS BLOODY CHIKAWOWOW DIVAS.! HAHAHAHA.. XD

So now back to the story. I'm not much of a spiderman fanatic but this is quite nice. But the ending was kind of.. Err.. Touchy for me. XD

It reminded me of those teleserye scenes I see on TV when the hero get's wounded and drama takes place.. hahaha..

Not a fan of those scenes. But this is still quite good.! 8D

GO TEAM C.! XD

-Mei Vir-
The Burnt Jewel chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
A truly heartbreaking story...i enjoyed it :)

The koko part was funny :) Well done :)

Happy writing and good luck with the next chapters :)
AnRi Wells chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Disappointing.

Because Natsume died. ): Why did he have to?

So who was that girl that Natsume saw? The one he stared at according to Koko? What happened to them?

Hmm let's see.

*Tenses. Common errors, even me.

*And this one -"He ditched me." I felt the angry (change to anger) build up...

*After thirty minutes of just sitting down, we headed to the bathroom and they washed my face and I felt cooled down and not that dizzy anymore. [You could chop this into two sentences. The whole and...and...and... is just long. "..and they washed my face. I felt cooled..."

:) Goodluck on the HouseCup! XD