|Reviews for The Apothecary|
| herart chapter 3 . 3/3
Nice rreading. Ha! Take that Lady Rowling, your epilogue didn't stop the affection and love :)
| acrimony1029341 chapter 3 . 2/5
A far better ending than the canon one. Though you could've written that harry dies and it'd still be better. Either way, well written and keep up the good work!
| dennisud chapter 3 . 2/2
Love it! Sure matches up with JKR's revelation!
| Cringo chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
Not sure you are still on fanfiction or if you get emails when someone reviews but I have read your story before and I guess the same question still bothers me. How does Harry know 100% James, Albus and Lily are his kids and not Ron's? Do they all have Harry's eyes? I would think he would want to be absolutely no doubts. And kids can be cruel, I could see someone throwing it in their face, about not knowing who your daddy is. James I don't think would be a big deal because he supposedly looks exactly like Harry, but not sure about the other two. Especially Lily.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
Damn! Wish I could see how the Weasleys dealt with this! THAT would be worth reading! :-D
| HP.HG. fan forever chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Nice little tale although I never would have suspected incest between Ron and Ginny. Certainly different.
| Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 12/13/2012
| slashslut chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
well, this was strange. and a bit disturbing yet hilarious!
| Kai chapter 3 . 9/1/2012
Oh, I love it! I really love it! In my opinion it's the best ending ever (at least for the main characters).
I absolutely love Harry/Hermione, it's the best pairing that makes sense in canon until book six, and they are so perfect for each other. From the ministry six that leaves Neville, Luna, Ron and Ginny. And when Ron and Ginny are Good!Ron and Good!Ginny, they are almost always paired Ron/Luna and Neville/Ginny, unless there is some Thomas/Bones/whoever involved. But Luna is much too good for Ron, I mean, they know each other since they were babies and Ron calls her 'Loony' all the time. Although he knows about her tragic loss at nine years old. And Neville is the only guy really faithful towards Harry all the time, although too shy to express it. He doesn't deserve the Potions Princess. So, that makes Neville/Luna. And that means Ron can have Ginny. It's pure logic of eliminating really possible pairings and so pairs the leftover Weasleys. And the stupid, jealous, lazy, food-destroying piece-of-shit-waste-of-precious-oxygen really deserves the money grabbing, raping-with-potions, silly fangirl. AND incest DOES play a big role in pureblood ideology. As in Merope Gaunt, who should have been impregnated by Morfin to keep the Slytherin line pure and such shit. So it's not really OOC for any pureblood family.
I'm really impressed to finally read the best solution for pairings according to my opinion! Too bad that I have no talent to write...
| Kermitty chapter 3 . 6/10/2012
That was really great. The wizarding law is kinda strange, but hey, half the things that happen in HP are kinda strange. The last two sentences were pure brilliance!
| tfobmv18 chapter 3 . 4/15/2012
I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work.
| squidbert chapter 3 . 3/6/2012
Hah, a much better ending than the-epilogue-that-sucked.
| Drac-frst chapter 3 . 2/4/2012
Strange. Disturbing. And strangely, disturbingly hilarious for what the topic was. Like a great many people, the canon pairings always bothered me, but I this is the first time I've ever seen someone go about fixing the canon 19-year-skip mess (that JKR did so she couldn't be forced to write more HP books) this way. A pretty good short-story, if a bit.. twisted there. Loved the HP/HG interactions.
| mickypants chapter 3 . 1/16/2012
It's always Ron Ginny's paired up with in incest fics. I wonder what it'd like if it was Bill/Ginny? Would Fleur go fireball crazy?
| bookivore chapter 3 . 1/9/2012
OK I like it, it's really sick, another reviewer said he didn't know if Arthur should be allowed to stay friends in hiding - I say sure he should! Especially since marriage is hard to get out of, and I bet Ron & Ginny got all of their self-love from dear old Mum. When Molly goes bad, she goes really really bad - and it's scary how believable it can be.