Reviews for Dancing in the Dark
dsrtchck chapter 4 . 11/16/2011
Stupid cliff hanger! Can't wait until you update next, hopefully Alice will pick Bella right away.
Elphaba Cullen chapter 4 . 11/15/2011
Wow sweets, this is turning into one of my all time favorite stories!

Love the new chapter...but it ended much too soon!

You and cliffy's seem to be having a thing! :)

You even inspired me to publish my own first story!

Please keep up the awesome job..

HappyLittleVegemites chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
Nothing beats a bit of bellice. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. :)
xxDark Angel Babyxx chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
That was great! Please update ASAP!
Elphaba Cullen chapter 3 . 11/9/2011

I was a little worried that Bella was getting used to being a lesbian too quickly and if I may say wholly unrealistic ally, but then my dearest darling Alice saved the day with a huge lashi g of angst and guilt!


Love ya sweet cheeks! Keep on writing, this stuffs like crack to me! ;)
dsrtchck chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
This is awesome! Loner chapters and some angst will make this amazing. Really glad you made this into a story and not a one shot. Can't wait to read your next update!
Elphaba Cullen chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
YAY! Peer pressure FTW! ;)

Totally continue ya big tease and longer chapters too! Don't start holdin out on us. Forget work/school/partner/food and write!

Ramp up the angst then a little pay off and then up the angst some more before the big payoff, then add drama...



Glad you caved in and stopped your foolish oneshot silly ideas.

Love ya!
ttrouble95 chapter 2 . 11/7/2011
I do think you should continue as thus far your story is captivating. I would try and give ideas, but its not much my forte. The best i can do is say almost anyway you take this will still end up being a very nice story, besides Bell just being with Edward. But what about Jasper? If it wasn't a dream, how does Alice feel about him? If it was, there's still that kiss..anyway thank you for what you've written so far.
Elphaba Cullen chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Oh come on!

You can't one shot that! That must be the start of a looooong series of hot, angsty, funny and occasionally sad awesome chapters?

Come on!
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