|Reviews for Dancing in the Dark|
| dsrtchck chapter 4 . 11/16/2011
Stupid cliff hanger! Can't wait until you update next, hopefully Alice will pick Bella right away.
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 4 . 11/15/2011
Wow sweets, this is turning into one of my all time favorite stories!
Love the new chapter...but it ended much too soon!
You and cliffy's seem to be having a thing! :)
You even inspired me to publish my own first story!
Please keep up the awesome job..
| HappyLittleVegemites chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
Nothing beats a bit of bellice. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. :)
| xxDark Angel Babyxx chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
That was great! Please update ASAP!
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 3 . 11/9/2011
I was a little worried that Bella was getting used to being a lesbian too quickly and if I may say wholly unrealistic ally, but then my dearest darling Alice saved the day with a huge lashi g of angst and guilt!
Love ya sweet cheeks! Keep on writing, this stuffs like crack to me! ;)
| dsrtchck chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
This is awesome! Loner chapters and some angst will make this amazing. Really glad you made this into a story and not a one shot. Can't wait to read your next update!
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
YAY! Peer pressure FTW! ;)
Totally continue ya big tease and longer chapters too! Don't start holdin out on us. Forget work/school/partner/food and write!
Ramp up the angst then a little pay off and then up the angst some more before the big payoff, then add drama...
Glad you caved in and stopped your foolish oneshot silly ideas.
| ttrouble95 chapter 2 . 11/7/2011
I do think you should continue as thus far your story is captivating. I would try and give ideas, but its not much my forte. The best i can do is say almost anyway you take this will still end up being a very nice story, besides Bell just being with Edward. But what about Jasper? If it wasn't a dream, how does Alice feel about him? If it was, there's still that kiss..anyway thank you for what you've written so far.
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Oh come on!
You can't one shot that! That must be the start of a looooong series of hot, angsty, funny and occasionally sad awesome chapters?