|Reviews for The Passionflower: A Girl's Journey Into Becoming a Pokémon|
| What Lies Beyond chapter 17 . 3/5
You really should expand on this story arc and make it a complete fic. I know a ot of people have done PMD fics before, but I think it would help explain Epsilon's background more (and I bet all his fans would like reading it, too).
| What Lies Beyond chapter 33 . 2/26
There ought to be a sequel to this oneshot. Perhaps the day the egg hatches? (I wonder what's inside?)
That could get ugly...
| Artie chapter 3 . 2/9
I loved your Jack Frost fics, so I decided to check out your Pokemon ones as I'm a slight (not huge) fan.
So far, I also really enjoy this world that you have come up with. I was a little bit shocked, as the writing style is SO different from The Ups and Downs, but your writing is very vivid and I had no trouble imagining the story.
I'll keep reading and review a couple times along the way. This seems to be a pretty decently sized fic so I'll be back whenever I happen to get that far.
| Tsaukpaetra chapter 33 . 2/8
Wait, where did he get that?!: p (cringes)
I don't personally know myself, but what's to say that breeding isn't just as fun as adventures?; :)
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/5
I just finished the first half of your story, and wow!
The development in Alfie was astronomical. I can't wait to see what happens from here. (:
| Lurking Pheonix chapter 33 . 2/5
Oh Yami you sneaky Gengar. XD The ending with him showing off the egg claiming is theirs is the perfect way to wrap up this daycare chapter. The chaos he's causing with the egg. XD I can imagine the other pokemon reactions and teasings. Oh and the "I told you so. I knew you two were going to get busy" XD
They're never going to let Alfie live this down. Ever. :)
| Lurking Pheonix chapter 18 . 2/4
I love this fic! :D Oh Dialga, you sly pokemon. So sneaky to get an indirect kiss somehow. XD The ending had me laughing out loud.
| Mudkipster chapter 32 . 12/27/2013
oh my fucking god yami you crazy kid
love this whole thing top to bottom
i also noticed luka's mention yay!
| LomaArchAngel chapter 32 . 12/26/2013
I guess it would make sense to tack your one-shots onto this story. xD I mean, I'm not complaining. I love seeing what everyone's up to after their big adventure.
I'll be awaiting more one-shots for TPF and more chapters for LBL. 8D
| Y-ko chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Oh, this story again. You're not bad at writing, but "gijinkas" rub me the wrong way. Is it a sex thing? Just tell me now if it's a sex thing.
| Deidara da Kitsune chapter 32 . 12/25/2013
Oh my gosh, Yami, what are you DOING? Where did that egg come from? But oh, how I ship those two... Sooner sounds like a fun character but props to them for busting out of the daycare. Imagine if that was real, going by the friendship levels of your Pokemon. Put in a ditto you've never used and BAM! Next morning, it's gone. O I love surprise updates like this. Please, never stop.
A Belated Merry Christmas to you too! (It's already Boxing Day in Australia)
| Cryptic Message chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Ever reminds me of Rarity from My Little Pony.
| Cryptic Message chapter 31 . 6/15/2013
I... I think... I think I may have a crush on Yami. O.o
| Mudkipster chapter 31 . 6/6/2013
THIS. STORY. IS. AMAAZIINNGG! This is ky second time reading this, and I love it even more! I looked for all my favorite parts, from pervy Dialga to the lights festival. God, the first time I read this story I was shipping Alfie and Yami soo hard. total fangirling. Hehe, but man this story has it all! I loved this so much, especially the ch 31 food fight, SINCE WE ALL HATED OPHELIA. And yay now I know some characters from the sequel like moor and Malacai! Yaaayy *happy reader jig inserted here* This is a true diamond of a Pokemon fanfic. I loved when she broke down and realized she needed to go back. . . all the small, adorable moments. *squeals* I liked Obsidian and how he played on people's fears. . . I love all the super fab quotes about bravery. I LIKED EVVEERRYYTHING RXCEPT FOR OPHELIA OH ARCEUS DON'T. Something I will NOT fangirl about is the legendary Pokemon structure thing. It was very interesting, all the secrecy and you-can't-trust-everyone. I am like: "Just give up the truth, you can fight it out later. The only thinh I hated it was when you worried about your chapters being too long! You made characters we CARE about- every single detail makes us squeal in delight. (Probably just me). Hehehe UPDATE THE SEQUEL BECAUSE I NEEEEDD TO DO SOME MORE ?
| Deidara da Kitsune chapter 31 . 5/27/2013
Wow, this was a pleasant surprise to see in my inbox! It's been a long time since I first read this, but I could still remember so much of it. I'm really glad you posted this
Still shipping Yami and Alfie