Reviews for The epic fail life of Lianna Hatchet
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
I don't think you're writing is bad, not at all, I just think you need to expand your sentence structures a tad; reading the same sentence type over and over gets old quickly.

(Super totally not flaming, keep up the good writing!) :D
Guest chapter 8 . 8/22/2012
Awwww
that was sooo sweet! I found the ending a bit rushed overall i loved the story!
FutureNargleHunter chapter 8 . 5/11/2012
Really nice story D

But I liked you're on about Silver more.
Melodiux chapter 8 . 11/26/2011
This is such an adorable story!
Melodiux chapter 7 . 11/26/2011
So sweet!
Melodiux chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Ooooooooooh, she has a plan!
Melodiux chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
I'm glad Rose and Scorp are together!
Melodiux chapter 4 . 11/26/2011
I like the poem, did you really write it?
Melodiux chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
Poor girl! She isn't fat!
Melodiux chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Poor girl, she's tongue tied! I like her, though :)
NAAAAWH chapter 8 . 11/15/2011
This was a really sweet fic! I really loved it!

Albus and Lianna's kiss was a bit like Harry and Ginny's but I don't mind, cuz that must be one of the sweetest kiss in the history of fantasyseries!