Reviews for The slaves
Mariacool1234 chapter 14 . 8/15/2016
Do you...
Do you continue this?
Mariacool1234 chapter 4 . 8/15/2016
Sometimes the ebaressent thing are so real for me that i ran trought the entire house!
Love it!
issy chapter 14 . 3/5/2015
cool, cool, but sadly not meh taste...more link x dark link. tis da reason ima on da sight.
issy chapter 2 . 3/2/2015
awesome story but vary lacking spelling...sorry, but please do better if you can.
Shearfang chapter 14 . 10/6/2013
I'm sorry i like the plot and how the story is going so far and all ,but i have to say your grammar or rather your writing skills need improvement because most of the time your not typing your sentances right or your just misspelling all kinds of words and it is really starting to irritate or piss me off to no end like the story hate the grammar.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/27/2013
nice chapiter
poor Link
friendly darkmoonlady
jellywedges19 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
lol duh hell! XD this is hillarious!
97kingdomwolf chapter 13 . 8/12/2013
you are cruel
darkmoonlady chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
nice chapiter
poor Link
friendly darkmoonlady
DrunkUnicorn chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
Yes you updated :DD Thanks :) can't wait to see how it continues :)
DrunkUnicorn chapter 12 . 8/7/2013
Continue pleaseee this is soouu amazing :D don't leave me just here :/
Vaati's Midna chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
O_o
Demon She-wolf chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
why would you write something like this
Majora's Mask Freak184 chapter 6 . 12/1/2012
What does oppaver here tirligere mean?
97kingdomwolf chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
alsome
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