|Reviews for The Revenge of Macavity|
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
As much as this sounds mean I hope Macavity gets Demeter but... does not kill her!
| bookworm chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I thought mungojerrie and rumplteazer were bro and sis
| AlleyCattDancer chapter 24 . 4/8/2013
Eeeps! Sounds like the last chapter's going to be a little bit on the violent side. Can't wait. :)
| ScreamingSunshine chapter 24 . 4/6/2013
RUMPLETEAZER-MACAVITY SHOWDOWN TIME.
I'm really glad that Cori and Tanto are finally reunited (my heart exploded just a little at that part), and that Organskully has been redeemed. Even I was starting to get confused about him. XD But, um, I'm really worried about Jennyanydots... I'm gonna cry if she dies. And of course you have Alonzo and the brand-new kits in there too... GAAAAHHH this story is so intense. It's amazing though, and genius-ly written. I'll be very sad when it ends, but like you said, it has to at some point..
Oh and by the way I'm so jealous of you seeing CATS! More excited for you than jealous though. :3 I've only ever seen the DVD too. I might be seeing it in July this year though, so that's a plus!
| ScreamingSunshine chapter 23 . 3/25/2013
This story is absolutely incredible. Not only is it written well spelling-wise and grammatically, the way you capture the characters is fantastic. Seriously, I can't even. I found it one night a few weeks ago while searching for Cats fanfiction on my phone, and I read until about 2:00 AM because I couldn't stop reading it. So, at the wonderful hour of 2:00 AM (I had school the next day, oh well), I got to the end of this chapter. Of course, I was like "OMG DJDRWGBJFSOFBNSHKSRJO" and when I went to go to the next chapter there wasn't one.
And then I died.
Okay, maybe not died. But I definitely remember curling into the fetal position. Anyhoo, I saved the link on my phone and then finally went to sleep. I've been wanting to make an account on this site for a while now, but I've just been too lazy. However, my want to tell you myself how amazing this story is and ask you to update it won over my laziness. Like I said in the beginning, this story is fantabulous. I can't even begin to tell you how awesome it is. So, because it is so amazing, I ask you, pretty pretty please with a cherry on top, update? XD I understand you're probably really busy, and I can't even begin to imagine how long it takes to write these. So don't take this as me saying "HEY. UPDATE. NOW, SLAVE." 'cause that's definitely not what I am trying to say. XD Just, the next time you get a chance, it would be wonderful if you wrote another chapter. That is all.
P.S. I apologize for the length of this message/comment/review/whateverit'scalled.
| Magical-Marvel-Mr.Mistoffelees chapter 23 . 2/4/2013
I'm so glad you've updated! I've been waiting for the conclusion of this FOREVER! I need to know what happens! I'm on the edge of my seat! This story has such a good winding and twisting plot! Keep up the good work! And please don't wait so long to update! ;)
| Tumblebrutus chapter 23 . 2/4/2013
This story is amazing! You are a total genius! Love it! Soooooo sad though. I cried buckets when Admetus died! Can't wait for the rest of the story! Thanks so much for the brilliant read! HUGS! x :)
| TuggersTuxedoTom chapter 22 . 10/13/2012
Soooo good :) :) :)
Update soon please! :)
| Tantomile Forever chapter 21 . 8/25/2012
Poor Cassandra and her kittens.
Please update soon, this story is amazing
| Cocobutterrox chapter 21 . 8/24/2012
I just had bug eyes throughout this entire chapter...
Only bigger...yeah ;D
Oh, plus my jaw dropped.
I wonder if Cassandra is alive or not...
I just can't believe how evil your Macavity is. He gives me the creeps xD haha. Kudos to you for being able to write such a twisted character! :D
Another brilliant chapter ;) Update soon!
| Kay chapter 20 . 7/27/2012
Oh my gosh please update this...
| Cocobutterrox chapter 19 . 7/14/2012
Hehe thanks for the mention :D
OMEC LES MIS! This. Rocks. And it's so sweet how she sang that song to him! Awwww *faint*
*Several moments later* *Gets up from floor, cradles head in hand*
I love the names of your OCs :D
Demeter's in denial :( I really want to see how her blind kitten grows up.
The emotions and reactions were so scary in this chapter! And I LOVE IT! Keep writing ;)
| Xbakiyalo chapter 19 . 5/24/2012
:O Wow. Literally, I think my jaw is on the floor at the moment. I have been waiting for a CATS fanfic like this for FAR too long! *_* Where do I start? I love that your Macavity is actually EVIL. I like that interpretation of him better than a resentful trickster who does nothing more than threaten the Jellicles without actually being effective. This Macavity is HELLA SCARY and that's what I like about him. He's an actual threat to their lives and safety - look what he did with just a click of his fingers! Wow :D I love how you're not afraid to shy away from the bad stuff (Teazer getting raped, ouch) that makes this more convincing and keeps the tension WAY UP THERE. Holy wow. The characterisation is awesome - I love Rumpleteazer and Mungojerrie's relationship, and Oranskully is an interesting new character (but he's a TRAITOR? AAAAAH!). The two things I would take issue with are how Cassandra wasn't showing any outward signs of pregnancy before (as Alonzo had no clue) and then suddenly being able to give birth to healthy kittens. But hey, artistic license. The other thing is that sometimes Teazer/Jerrie's accent is really hard to make sense of, due to the amount of missing letters and everything XD I understand you're trying to convey the Cockney, but I think maybe you go too far? But those are really small points, this really is a great story and I am so excited to see more :D
| lovesaphira chapter 18 . 3/13/2012
loving this fanfic.
Generally i see Mungojerrie and Rumpleteazer as more siblings than mates but i like this fanfic enough to overlook that for this one. LOL.
can't wait to read more :D
| MewPainappuru chapter 18 . 3/11/2012
AH HELL NO! Freaking Oranskully... Dammit... (I'm clearly upset by this lol) Why? T_T Ugh... I'm so annoyed with him... But this was a great chapter, as always! And I can't wait until your next update :3