Reviews for The Primal, Eldest Curse
H. Artemis chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
It's dark and the feel is wonderfully so. Although I love the last line best, it gives the story a lot more impact with the foreshadowing.
slioe chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
oh my!well written..the emotions and darkness of the characters :)
Bran-Chant chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This is a great idea! I would love to read more! Oh Charles~

I didnt see any grammar errors. :D
Cordelia Darcy chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Once again, dark but amazing. You have true talent for writing, and as much as I adore (and by "adore", I mean "live off of") cute and fluffy stuff, darker material can be just as powerful.
104Arianna chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Really well written :D great job!
bulma9013 chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Vinie chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
It was a very beautiful story, thank you
IHaveDeactived chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I love you for writing this. I love stories about Charles' past. What is it about main character abuse syndrome? Anyway good story- deep, emotional, and worth the read!
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
dark and evil and i lvoe it nice just nice
Romanec chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
FINALLY! A Charles-lets-Erik-know story. D; Ohmygosh. Charles! I loved the angsty flashbacks, how they just fit right in. Erik! So tragic, like two torn-up pieces of a puzzle trying to fit together like they should, but can't because they're damaged. Because it was Cain and Herr Doktor that had the puzzle last...

Agh! I love you. The angst, them. I LOVE THIS. ~melts~ THANKYOU.