Reviews for Lesson Learned |
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![]() ![]() Really enjoyed your story...I think it was a very realistic portrayal of how Steve would react to Danny thinking he would be a bother to Steve.. Well done! |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story...full of bromance but very different.. KUDOS |
![]() ![]() This was a great story! I'm glad I found it. Great dialogue. |
![]() ![]() I know this kind of behaviour isn't good and the fic really showcases how stupid this is but like, I'd probably do the same haha. I hate putting my problems onto others so I just, keep in living like it is rip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely oneshot - good pacing and chracterization, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just about six years late here... but I love this you for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The very obnoxious clothes are obviously part of the punishment to teach Danny that he really needs to lean on his Ohana as much as they know they can lean on him. Very enjoyable story with Steve getting to do the ranting for once. |
![]() ![]() I know I'm several years late but I loved this. Danny is so hot but he's also a very complex character. I also get the impression that he is used to being the strong one and the problem solver that everybody turns to for help. Later seasons confirm this with stories about his family in NJ. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I surprised Kono got Danny those clothes. That is a Steve move. But at least Danny is Ok and will be now that he has his friends to help. AND it is so him to keep something like this to himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome! I loved it, but the best part was the outfit at the end! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading your fics because I loved the 1st one I read. You write phenomenal dialog! Excellent! Mari |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. So Steve, so Danny. You captured them perfectly! I look forward to reading other stories of yours! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Danny was okay... Ending with humor. Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet story and the emotions where very good |