Reviews for Papa
cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Interesting one shot
CarpeDiemEveryday chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
This wall of text could do with some spacing out. Maybe ask a beta for help, but it's a lot to read without any breaks. As for Cassidy, well, for one thing, I never really pictured Rockets at her level as murderers, so that's interesting. At the same time, I don't really know that this makes sense. Why would becoming a mobster make her father proud? Also, it might help to have Cassidy be sitting somewhere as she mulls this over. Stories that take place entirely in thoughts are, on the whole, less interesting to read. Maybe you could expand this into a whole story? Have her encounter things that remind her of her father, and show her internal struggle?

Still, it's interesting to see people writing about Cassidy and not having her being a bluh bluh huge bitch. So that's nice.

Carp