Reviews for Just Fat
danni mills chapter 23 . 9/24/2014
Hi, if you still had that writer's block then i think it would make a good chapter if you did a 5 MONTHS LATER thing and showed the birth of the twins and maybe ziva dies during birth or something like that It is not very nice but it is a good story,
Good Luck,
Danni Mills
This is me chapter 23 . 5/20/2013
Please finish the story! I know it's been years since you last updated but its really good and maybe you could just jump forward to when the twins are born and a few years old or a sequel or something but please end it, it would be great to see what the twins are like and just please end it please please please, you are such s great writer and you're just awesome and one chapter is enough for me but please end it if you do make another authors note, I'll look into the story every now and then and it would be just great, only 1 or 2 chapters more would be enough but please end it
Zeynep chapter 23 . 5/8/2012
Please update I loved it:)
ncisXpsych12345 chapter 23 . 3/11/2012
I just found your story and I love it so much, it's very well written. And for your writers block I am sorry but I don't have any ideas, sorry
Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 22 . 1/16/2012
mon-petit-pois chapter 23 . 12/26/2011
Damn. I got excited when I saw the update:/

Guess I should have seen this coming.

Nothing comes to mind right now, but if I think of anything I will be sure to tell you hun:)
Lavender Angel-96 chapter 22 . 11/26/2011
UUPPDDAAAAAAATEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! PLEASE, your fanfic speaks about the truth of victims of rape and about Ziva even if she wasn't pregnant or as emotionally on NCIS, but your fanfic gives you more insight o what she could have felt, thought, and just remembered.
Cricket Songs chapter 3 . 11/4/2011
One quick correction as I'm reading this - Ziva was held by Hamas terrorists, not Al-Qaeda.
NCISfan with Tivafever chapter 22 . 10/30/2011
Wow so much has happened, i didn't realise so many chapters had been uploaded. I think that ziva is making lots of progress even tho she's still having nightmares.

Loads of great chapters. Well done. :)
mon-petit-pois chapter 22 . 10/29/2011
I loved these chapters;) can we see more of Khamud?
mon-petit-pois chapter 19 . 10/26/2011
All I can say is awww:) how cute. It's horrible what is happening to her yet it manages to warm your heart over with the comfort.
NCIS Connection chapter 17 . 10/26/2011
So glad she talked to Abby! She needs a girlfriend besides and Abby would be funny together.
NCIS Connection chapter 18 . 10/26/2011
Wow Gibbs reaction is not what I thought!
NCIS Connection chapter 19 . 10/26/2011
Tony is so sweet!
mon-petit-pois chapter 16 . 10/26/2011
I loved this chapter:( poor poor ziva:(
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