Reviews for Sydney's Story
Kate chapter 21 . 5/3/2012
I have been reading this story for some time and I just thought I would let you know that I am thoroughly enjoying it. Keep up the good work! I look forward to a new chapter. :P

Kate
Marie S Zachary chapter 16 . 3/20/2012
Thanks so much for dedicating the chapter to me. I c where your going with this but don't kill Charles off just yet or Gabrielle for that matter
Marie S Zachary chapter 9 . 2/8/2012
"I was the man operating the guillotine on the day you were sentenced to die," Pierre continued. "When I saw that you were to be the next to die, I knew that I simply couldn't do it. I dismantled the guillotine and walked away. I was punished for doing so, of course, but it was worth it. I just couldn't take the life of the woman I've loved since childhood. That's right, Gabrielle. I loved you then, and I still love you now."

Okay you're amazing. You took my story and turned it into your own. I LOVE THAT
EmJ chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
I. Love. This.

Honestly, writing something like this was the first thing I thought of when I read A Tale of Two Cities. A I think you did fabulously.

I would have liked to see more build up in the beginning though, and perhaps some more emotion. Are they relieved? Scared? Happy? I couldn't tell.

I think is a great story and I can't wait to read more!
NeverSayGoodbye chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Ooh, this is interesting! 8D
Marie S Zachary chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
You were inspired by my story weren't u? I'm honored