Reviews for A Successful Mission
artemis5 chapter 1 . 1/3
gosh too feel that safe asleep must be great
Violently Red chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Politelycynical chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
:D I love all of your yj stories. More, please.
BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 5/13/2012

No, i don't think it's ooc at all. Great job!
Mewgirl223 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Loved it so cute
ColdBlueGirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Aww! Cute story! Keep up with the excellent work!
animeaddict2323232 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Awwww dis was cute! I loved this! Wally/Artemis...represent
The chick with no fucking pen chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
ahhhh soo cute!
Ben chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Reina Grayson chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
okay, people are starting to make me like Artemis, this is the second story in one day that I've read and actually like Artemis in.
asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjklasd chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Your writing is absolutely gorgeous. I loved the sweeping, cinematic detail and the way you got into Artemis' head; her concern, her panic, her relief, and then that sweet little moment when they took shelter.

I think you did stay pretty true to their personalities. And given the panicked moment, I think this is something that very well could have happened.

Thank you for sharing :)
Hopelessly Unromantic chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
I don't really look for OOC whenever I read. I pay more attention to the storyline. XD

Like with you mentioning Jade leaving made me go look up and confirm that Artemis is Cheshire's sister. (Don't I feel like an idiot.) XD

Overall, I really liked this. I congratulate you on an amazing first Spitfire story. I hope you continue to write in this section(:
rainbowspring chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Great job!
ygirl87 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
u sure this is ur 1st yj story? IT WAS AWESOME!
cary99 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Oh snap loved the story
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