|Reviews for The Joys of Taking Marriage Sex and Family|
| dauntlessofthesea chapter 25 . 4/22
I do think you dramatized it a little bit too much at some moments. Coming from me, this is surprising. Remember that if you put those omg moments all the time, the omg part of them loses value.
But otherwise, I absolutely loved it :D
| Zatsune D. LawLuFan chapter 25 . 3/26/2016
I know you finished (I am very glad you did, some don't finish) this _masterpiece_ 5 or so years ago and I don't know if you will ever see this, bur hear me out.
Thank you. Thank you for writing this (best) Drarry fic I have ever read. And I have read hundreds and hundreds of other Drarry fics, short and longer plot oneshots, oneshots consisting of only smut and these long masterpieces with a lot of emotions and plot.
I started to read this yesterday (26th of March) at 1pm or so and here I am reviewing you on 27th of March at 2.30 AM. I am glad it's Easter holiday now.
Anyway, I read this in only a day (normally takes a day or two to read 100k words) and you have made me laugh, blush, angry and cry in few hours. With words. I laughed to jokes in this, blushed to sexual jokes and shagging (I am used to it, but in cute way) and angry to that damned Zacharias in Three Broomsticks. I was emotional and had a lot of empthany (probably mispelled, I am not English speaker by born, I am Finnish) for Draco and Harry (I will always love them) and cried with them, especially during the lasy few chapters, specially in Epilogue. I cried in joy when they got Becca back. I cried a lot. My eyes and head hurts, but I am happy.
I am and will always be in love with Drarry and m-preg, so they had a lot of pretty and _brilliant_ children of their own! And Rebecca baby (the real one) was a happy news to me. Really.
Oh, this is a longest review I have ever wroter, ever, but you deserve all these words and more. I will recomend this to all my Drarryfan friends. This need more fame and spotlight!
Zatsune D. DrarryFan
Ps. Did Draco get a matching ring for Harry? Or something different? I hope they were similar, maybe not identical, but similar. 3
| Halunygin chapter 25 . 2/10/2016
I love love loved this! So many embarrassing things happened to Harry and Draco, I was constantly shutting my eyes, cringing, and muttering "No, they didn't really have that happen to them, did they?"
Beautiful, just beautiful.
| Harriet Cheng chapter 25 . 1/20/2016
I've just finished reading this fabulous story!Can't stop laughing when Harry and Draco scowl at each reminds me of the scene in Chamber of Secrets what Draco and Harry acted at the Duelling gave Harry a Tarantallegra and Harry gave him a Tickling Charm. Soooooooo cute!Thank you for your incredible work.I really enjoy reading it.
(Please forgive me for my poor expression,cuz that I'm not very good at English:-P
| willowflickerman chapter 25 . 11/23/2015
Oh my gosh! I sat here for about 4 hours reading this. It's just perfect. The characters were fabulous, the plotline was great, I've laughed to the point of crying, and cried with sadness. Well done, you!
| floophoenixLing chapter 20 . 9/8/2015
OMG! this is so sad! I almost cried!
| serenityselena chapter 25 . 7/27/2015
fabulous story with interesting twists :)
| Dragonfury16 chapter 12 . 1/29/2015
did they leave rebecca sleeping alone and went to a dance? ha
| latina.raindrop.and.irish.hart chapter 25 . 12/4/2014
Cutesy story i have read in a longgggggg time
| Guest chapter 25 . 10/18/2014
I'm coming very late into the Harry Potter fandom, I just got the 1st book at the library the other day; and I haven't watched any of the movies. I've only seen clips of young Draco (to hear his voice) and Harry. My introduction to the series has been through a friend and fanfiction. Drarry fanfiction to be precise.
This is one of the first I've read. I can honestly say that it has been one of the best fanfics I've ever read. The way you portrayed the characters was brilliant, and I can tell that you have a great sense of humor.
You were incredibly realistic and down to earth in how you phrased everything and I give you a congrats for that. I noticed that some people complained about the number of kids you gave them, but I don't have a problem with it. A lot of people have/like big families. I have 5 siblings, so that's pretty normal. And I have to admit that i thought that it was wise how you left the process of the birth out. Some people don't like m-prey. And some don't like surrogates. This way you left it up to the reader to decide; which I think was genius. In addition to these, I believe that you made Draco perfect in his emotional state-no one's completely resistant to emotion-even a Malfoy. And I think you showed that well. I love how Draco embraced his submissive side when Harry became dominant. I find no problem with the lack of lemons simply because of how you wrote it.
In all, I think you have real talent in your writing style (I love it), and i hope you continue to write. Especially Drarry. I was extremely excited to see that you were last active in July; that's recent! Anywho continue being awesome. I will never have enough words to describe how amazing this fic was.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
I know I'm a little late, (try three years) but I just absolutely adored this story, beyond words. I stayed up all night on the last day of summer to finish it. xD
Wonderful job, really; it was stunning. One of the best stories I've read on here, I swear. Just...*is stupidly incoherent*
P.S. I love how you didn't turn Snape into an OOC mushy sap like so many people like to do. (Even though I also secretly adore a sentimental Snape every now and again)
| Spooky1001 chapter 25 . 8/13/2014
A very light-hearted and happy story 3
| Drarryfan23 chapter 25 . 1/5/2014
That was wonderful!
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/3/2014
"Oh gods, anything" I've noticed that you always write gods instead of god, I wonder why. It was a good fanfiction, but it got really too mushy and fluffy and the end. I love happy ending, I do. But come on! 5 or 6 kids! And you didn't even wrote how they got their kids. This epilogue is too fairy tale-y for me, sorry.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/3/2014
Great, great, g-r-e-a-t. That's just brilliant. Really, just what I needed.