Reviews for The Boy Who Lived and the Last Lantern |
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![]() ![]() can harry have wives like rias and naruko and sakura and wonder woman and hippoyta and summer rose and raven branwen and raynare and padme and leia and aayla and ahsoka tno |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad this was dropped |
![]() ![]() ![]() This getting an update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Third time in reading anything in over a decade I cried from something I read. Damn this pulls at the heart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story; I hope you come back to it someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very promising. I'm usually pretty bored when I read about James and Lily, moments before they're attacked by Voldemort, but luckily you kept it short and interesting enough in that time with some fluff. So now, I'm excited to see Harry become a Green Lantern and defeat Voldemortthat is, if this story has even reached that latter point, considering it's abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story abandon update or are you planning to update again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() tell me if i am the only one who hates that old pedo hoemoe nonse dumb dumbledore arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really enjoyable and well written story. I liked that you skipped over most of the slow Hogwarts stuff that is normally just rehashed. I assume this is now abandoned but I'll follow it anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Harry is so beta. You have him following around that side character that was barely mentioned in canon. Harry Potter raised by Bruce Wayne would have had enough of the mistreatment after the first few months and asked to leave Hogwarts. He would never put up with that abuse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way the marauder’s map was destroyed was so contrived. There’s no way the twins would have put it in a position to be destroyed. They would have seen Snape on the map and would have hid it immediately. Even given Ron 30 seconds as a distraction wouldn’t have been enough. There’s a reason they were never caught before. Also, charmed objects ARE allowed. Your Snape just made that rule up. Let’s just go with your contrived circumstances…the twins would have yelled mischief managed right after Ron grabbed the map to prevent their firstie brother from seeing the map. And after Snape rounded the corner, they would have a chance to do it as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There’s no way in hell Harry would have pushed the issue to go to Hogwarts. He would have been fine going to another school or learning from books. |
![]() ![]() Update as you can the story is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() still one of the most emotional chapters ive ever read, great opening chapters thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Three year now. Are you going to pick it back up? I am on FF, so PM if you want. |