Reviews for The Boy Who Lived and the Last Lantern |
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![]() ![]() ![]() grat story looking forward to you contiuing it! |
![]() ![]() hate it when writers up and abandon good stories. but like the author said im not paying i don't get a say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw harry going to be the first robin that was from england |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've always wondered what 'shake the foundation of magic means'... Oh well. I Swear 50% of the stories nowadays have a summaty like this: Hadrian is an innocent boy, neglected by his family, abused by his relatives, he will throw off the shackles of those who manipulate him and shake the foundation of magic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That second letter made me weep dude. Geez I'm still freakin crying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story here so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you. Interesting story :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t wait for the next update! With that said I CAN wait until your ready to post! |
![]() ![]() ![]() why not have harry kill him? that would have been far better |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying this story. It's been quite a while since the story was last updated, but hope it does get continued. Happy New Year |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story thank you for writing it look forward to finishing it someday |
![]() ![]() *Every night since their death she had drank herself into a stupor; consoled in the fact that she had a piece of them left in this world* "Every" night? Like, literally 365 days a year for 4 years? She must spend a fortune on hangover cures. Your Minerva is a bit... obsessive... considering how little context you've given to her relationship with the Potters (beyond them being her favorite students...). This fic is a bit lacking in real direction or real character growth. Gonna have to give it a miss. |
![]() ![]() Good tale of course |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think harry even hit puberty yet, why was that even a question xD ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I kinda guessed that eventually Harry and Kara's relationship would strain with him being away for a giant portion of the year and her responsibilities as an aspiring hero. It's sad to see a relationship like that strain and stretch like that. |