Reviews for The Boy Who Lived and the Last Lantern |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Think you should have skipped this whole chapter since you ended up dumping him on the dursley doorstep, sentencing him to hell just like canon. Frankly it just made albus, minerva and sirius all look even more moronic and lacking in common sense than canon. You shoul have just picked it up from where it *really* changes from canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loooooooooooooooooooooove it. please please continue. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very glad to see someone has taken enough interest in the original to take it upon themselves to rewrite and continue it. Power of Oa was always one of my favourite on here, despite its issues. Hopefully you don't deviate too far from the original, particularly the Harry/Kara pairing (though the "Chef Harry" stuff towards the end of the original could be toned down a bit). As your remake so far, I'm very much enjoying it, especially how it feels more fleshed out than The Power of Oa did. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() I like this. Not sure how you will get there yet, but so far it seems to be a good show. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have always like this story but the start ofit always make me sadon how he could have died and how ever one thinks he is dead it kind reminds me of a story by alorkin a shocking discovery part 1 and 2 it on ficwad he also has a good star wars cross over go to |
![]() ![]() ![]() Several years ago "The power of Oa" was the first crossover I read. You have an enjoyable writing style, with no spelling mistakes I have seen and grammar good enough that any mistakes go unnoticed; but more importantly, you've updated within the past six months. Please, for the love of all that is holy, keep updating this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting start. I enjoyed the first version and look forward to seeing how it compares to it. It has a lot of potential. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good. Glad Batman is the one who will be taking him in. Out of all of them, he is the best fit. I look forward to seeing when Harry begins using his powers, including his magic. Also, as a minor critique, I suggest you find a beta. There were some things that needed polishing/editing. Anyway, looking forward for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really like what you have added to the original story from The Power of Oa by Bluminous. It adds a little depth that hadn't shown through well. Don't for get about Giovanni "John" Zatara and his daughter Zatanna Zatara they would probably recognize Harry Potter being magical themselves, Bluminous didn't delve into this area that I can remember. Can't wait to see what else you write next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting beginning. I like how you explain Dumbledore's reasoning for placing Harry with the Dursleys. It really was the only option... unfortunately. As for McGonagall, I really felt for her and Harry. Well, looking forward for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. It has potential. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() Hey that was a nice start plz write more and plz update this story often:-) |