Reviews for The Day You Went Away
ChristianMom54 chapter 34 . 1/24
Sorry I'm late reading this but is is wonderful to read. I like the twist on the story. I liked how you got there too. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
sillyvamp chapter 34 . 5/30/2014
Great and original story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
EeWee chapter 34 . 5/11/2014
Wonderful story. New Moons are my favorite. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
2loveybunnies chapter 34 . 4/13/2014
Great story, thanks for finishing it before you decided to leave the fandom. I'm glad I waited to read it once it was complete because I don't think I could have stood the long pauses between updates, but I do understand real life gets in the way. Thanks for sharing this with us, and good luck with your new stuff!
Guest chapter 34 . 1/23/2014
I hate the ending. My God, why they all always have to be so understanding? Kieran stole Bella's will, he made her her slave, her puppet. Let's get real, who would want to be his friend? Who would trust him? I would never speak to him again. If I didin't kill him myself I would fucking cut his dick. Being a vampire supposed to have so advantages. Maybe I'm the only person who complain about it but I really hate that they all forgave Kieran.
BridieM chapter 23 . 10/27/2013
Yeah. Edward can be a fool. But I still don't trust Kieran.
BridieM chapter 20 . 10/27/2013
One moment I have hope. The next all is forsaken. Then again, a moment late, I feel the need to punch something, and I am not a violent person. All at once confusion takes over. Hang about where did all this self doubt come from...
BridieM chapter 19 . 10/27/2013
Damn Edward. He runs at the first sign of difficulty!
BridieM chapter 17 . 10/27/2013
Kieran can't be trusted.
BridieM chapter 14 . 10/27/2013
Kieran is cunning. Completely alienating Bella from all her friends in the dream world, which supports alienation in the twilight world. Scary.
BridieM chapter 11 . 10/27/2013
Kieran's feeling do for Bella have surprised me. :)
BridieM chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
David Tennant...a favourite Dr Who. ;P
BridieM chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
So is this a Victoria scheme involving Kieran who has gift to enter dreams? He twists and turns reality, in the dream state, attempting to isolate Bella in reality? For example dream Jacob is someone to be feared, hence real Jacob has a taint of that fear. It's your story and it is intriguing. ;)
BridieM chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
I am so concerned for Bella. My heart goes out to her. :(
BridieM chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
*draws ragged breath*. Poor Bella. :(
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