Reviews for Desperate Revenge
Chips chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Good start
xxxheartlandxxx14 chapter 57 . 8/27/2013
I love Jason, this part was so funny!
DiamondthePirate chapter 61 . 5/20/2013
Guest chapter 61 . 5/1/2013
Omg! I love this story it can compete with some of the books I read you are amazing!
Ace-Zychen179 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Hi, just wanted to say you're strory is really great. I love the conflict of characters and dark setting. I actually have a hero of my own, White Heron. If you'd like to do a collaboration or just RP's contact me at
I'm trying to put a team together to create a sort of smaller dc universe type. I'm new member so I can't post yet but good work.
RivalsAreAllies chapter 61 . 1/1/2013
Girl, thank YOU for the AMAZING ride, with these AMAZING characters! ...Time for the SEQUEL!

P.S. A bonus of having your life implode, and being off of FFN for MONTHS, is that when you come back, you have ALL of this to read, AND you DON'T have to wait for the sequel! XD
RivalsAreAllies chapter 60 . 1/1/2013
Well, it's actually not that unconventional. The Justice League kills (when they ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO). The Avengers kill (when they ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO). I think what makes it original, is that it is a TEENAGE TEAM, that is, for ONE of the FEW times that it's been done, actually using this philosophy/method.

Justin. Captain America would be proud. I would say BatMan, or SpiderMan...but, let's be real...they'd be pissed! XD

Logan would be grinning from ear-to-ear, and Mia would be all: "I call first kill!" (on rapists...and ring-runners, only...mostly).
RivalsAreAllies chapter 59 . 1/1/2013
Justin is now old enough to drive the BatMobile...oh, good God, the horror...
RivalsAreAllies chapter 58 . 1/1/2013

...Stupid "New 52," and their STUPID reboot...I mean, Tim Drake wasn't even ROBIN, in "The New 52!" He just skipped STRAIGHT to being "Red Robin!" ...Like, WTF?!

Anyways, more Steph, please (and why isn't she and Tim dating?!)
RivalsAreAllies chapter 57 . 1/1/2013

MY cousin kept breaking Red Robin in that game! She was all: "Time didn;t return my love, so I WILL HAVE MY VENGEANCE!"

...She's eight. ...Maybe I shouldn;t have introduced her to comics, just yet...her mom (my aunt), was slightly pissed.

LOL, Jason breaking Dick! Hilarious. Dick would beat him badly in a one-on-one fight, though, so I suppose that this is a fair outlet for his anger...but, I never understood his anger at Dick. Bruce, okay, I get. But, Dick?! Dick ONLY, EVER, tried to HELP Jay! HE even took a BULLET for him! And then Jason tries to shoot him...I just don;t understand that boy sometimes...NO ONE shoot at NightWing!

Okay, that moment is over...I wanna go play Lego Batman, now! XD
RivalsAreAllies chapter 56 . 1/1/2013
"Alfred sighed as we tussled, 'I wonder when she'll figure out he does it just to provoke her for his amusement.'"

Oh, Alfred. We all know that you're the smartest one in the BatFam! XD
RivalsAreAllies chapter 55 . 1/1/2013
You know what? Jason is a good dad. ONE thing that "BatBoys," are SURE to AWESOME at, is being fatherly. Dick was born with it in him (can I get a hug?), and Tim is to sentimental to NOT catch that...but Jason? Such a softie!
RivalsAreAllies chapter 54 . 1/1/2013
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW, Demon/Demon bro/sis fluff! AWWWWWW! ...Still not sure who's the worse demon, but I'd HATE to be Bruce regardless!

...I know who he can call to babysit...SpiderMan! ...Well, no. Pete wold just let them lose on the city, and be all: "Just don't kill anyone!" ...Or he'd web them to a wall, and knock them out...maybe Logan would be a better choice (*pictures Logan gutting the youngest BatKids*)...okay, nevermind I said any of that.
RivalsAreAllies chapter 53 . 1/1/2013

"I like boys." ...Well, some boys. XD
RivalsAreAllies chapter 52 . 1/1/2013
Justin's got a knife! ...That's deadlier than giving Logan Howlett a nuke! ...Maybe...okay, it'd be pretty close...
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