Reviews for An Impossible Dinner Invitation
Vylria chapter 1 . 2/28
Wow nice story for KM. You didn't rush the plot, also not exaggerating their aggression. Everything feels natural and make sense.
One thing i don't understand though, what was the objects in the box mean?
Wolf-of-Five-Elements chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Great story! I enjoyed reading it.
LoneRyu chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Wow a great KaguMoko fanfics,

I really like it and I believe this should suffice the reasons behind all that KaguMoko doujins, you put it in greatly.

I hope you'd write a story like this more. :D
Admiral Azer Yamato chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
is it me or did Mokou and Kaguya relationship changed from



Ultimate Tsundere


'I'll show my love to you by beating the crap out of you'

Ascoeur chapter 1 . 1/29/2012

It was a nice, short, and simple piece. I loved it. WRITE MORE IN THE FUTURE XD!
Dinoctes chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Wow. That was superb. Seriously, this story was amazing.

I think the dialogue is what brought this story to life. You did a fantastic job illustrating the change in the relationship between the two of them.

Nice work!
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
You...You made my entire YEAR with this beautifully written TeruMoko story...

The execution, the flow...

Even though this is short, it was written so well and fitted perfectly within the short time-span...

The simplistic way of Kaguya's apology and the human reactions of both parties made me smile and hold a glass to the lovely couple in celebration...

Say, will there be a second chapter or a sequel to this little gem..?

It would be nice to see the reactions of everyone that finds out that the two immortals have made up because of a simple 'I am sorry'...

Haha, Aya is going to have to find another article to write in the Bamboo Forest other than their feud now that it is over~

(Ah yes, I also noticed a ReiTeru pairing earlier in this story...I have seen pictures of Kaguya and Reimu together~)
The Ultimate Chimera Bloodline chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Amazing story. This one's a perfect explanation for a huge question. The story was well structured and had a good length. Oh, and most importantly...YOU DIDN'T INCLUDE YURI! Now that's something I'm very grateful about!
Patcheresu chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
A nice bit of fluff indeed.
Skygraze chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Nice. Very nice.

I share your sentiment regarding the KaguMoko doujins. They could at least try to make up a reason, even if it's not believable.

Anyway, I really liked this piece. All the way from Kaguya's wish to help Mokou to the Fire Girl's emotional burst. It was dramatic (in a good way)and full of emotion. This pairing is one of my favorites. There's so much potential in there.
HopelessRomanticist chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
...This was actually really well done. Kaguya seemed a bit nicer than fandom generally has her, but certainly within the boundries of belief. Mokou's realisation that revenge is all she (thought she) had left was something of a tear-jerker, but that just made everything after that line even sweeter.

All in all, a very nice explanation behind K/M. Thanks for the story,