Reviews for Chuckie's Revenge
little girl chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
punctuation would help. but then, I am simple.
rugrats fan 24 chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
make it more better mate
Queen of Spiritual chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
The plot is good but I do think you have to work more on your grammar, such as: "," also your commas, periods, question marks, etc. You should listen to your other reviewer since I do agree with the reviewer but I don't want you to ignore this kind of advice but I do want you to get better with your grammar so readers would know you are getting better at your English or not. Readers and reviewers can be picky at this kind of thing like myself. This is just some advice you need to work on from the reviewers are trying to give out. I'm not being mean but I am trying to help out.
TheKid'sKid chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Your grammar and puncuation skills need quite a bit of work, hon.