|Reviews for in front of the children|
| celestaur chapter 1 . 5/24
This is so weird that I can totally see this happening PROPS TO YOU MAN I LOVE YOU (GraLu is like my guilty pleasure otp)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/12
That was just pointless next time think when you write and I'm being harsh just so I can make people better writers. Oh it was also pathetic and stupid and I do kind ship them so yeah so don't think I'm only making fun of it just because I'm also a Nalu shipper
| Snavej chapter 1 . 3/14
I can't ship Graylu, but this is really funny and I am glad I read it!
| Lotus-Archer chapter 1 . 3/7
Omg this was adorbs yes XD
| CalamitySage chapter 1 . 2/4
The funniest part is that I can totally picture this happening lol XD.
| smilekey chapter 1 . 1/27
I ship Nalu but dying right now
This is genius
| FrustratedMaidenTellie chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
This is awesome and sooooo Hilarious!
| Misuri8475 chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Lol! That was Crazie, Awesome and love it!
| StarTrail chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Omg lol that was great!
| werd me chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
| Beautifully Natural chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
AHAHAHAHA. OMGEE. I LUHV' IT. BRILLIANT. When I read the plot (or summary?) I was all like, "Dayum. Lemme see dis'." JEEPERS. This is like AWESOME. You have the best creative mind EVUR'. OmGEE. I am in LOVE WITH THIS! xD
| Paname chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Short and hilarious. I loved it.
| chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Dang. Was. It. Hilarious!
Anyway, the last line was PRICELESS! Heheh. Cooking channel? And here Vic thought that they would move on something else ...
| Alex Cobra girl chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
| FriendsForevaa chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
"Oh, god! It's turned us into monsters!"
This sentence screams Lucy's character XD The last line, hahaha. You need to come back now! Please, I want more of your stories!